Reviews for Piltover's Finest
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24
Nice work I came 6 times
STEEL GHOST 3 chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
A nice short story, but it needed more detail in the story telling.
AbbyAbsol chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
Plz write a second part to this! It was really good!
Alex chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
That's not ok , how much porn did u watch before doing this?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
Br uuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is def pepperoni. The Overlord of all pizza. So its gud.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
Daaammmm son, that "you lik the view!" scene just blow my head. Amazing!
TheLoreWriter chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
The basic story isn't bad, but it felt way too rushed. The whole story was basically Vi wakes up, talks to a guy, gets shot (which does really make sense with the amount of defense she has with her shielding and armor) goes to hospital, goes to caits house, sees Cait masturbating and then they have sex. It didnt really have any need for the first half based on how it was written. You could have just as easily made it plain and simple smut starting when Vi wakes up in Caitlyn's house. It wasn't bad, but it needs a lot of work.
silver butter chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
this was good but to be honest when caitlyen was you know after the vi left the hospital i thought it was jayce doing cait talk about a surprise twist nice job
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
At least! a history were Vi get something from Caitlyn XD That's amazing, I dont know why, it's like everybody forget the poor Vi in the bed, just Cait have fun XD
The only thing that I dont understeand is the injury in Vi's shoulder XD I think you forget that jajajajaja

Thanks for write us!

(Sorry if I wrote something wrong, I speack spanish but I read in english because I read all the stories VixCait XD)
VaginaDestroyer chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Not bad at all
Nogui chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Overall: pretty amusing! Can't say the story itself was the best I've read, it felt almost like a hurried up excuse to get them in bed. My worse critic is how Vi has a ton of armor, and a force field generator, and a single bullet takes her out.

Holy shit, but that sex was pretty well written. I "accidentally" clicked the fav button. XD
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
The hentai part one was AWESOME!
A-829 HD chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
plz plz make part two
me gusta chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
amazing... end of discussion
lol chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
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