Reviews for Sink to the Bottom With You
Katharine Frost chapter 1 . 10/9/2000
This is exceptionally good for a fanfic (in case you haven't noticed, there's a lot of junk 'round here). I am admittedly impressed, and I hope you'll continue with this story ... and quickly! Of course, I love Vincent and Yuffie stories, so I might be somewhat biased.

Anyway, I have only one point of advice for you: your descriptions are beautifully done, but I noticed that sometimes they can get awkward. Examples: "...the sudden influx of thoughts that inundated her mind...". Don't misunderstand me - description is good. But sometimes more words than necessary are used ... brevity is the soul of wit, right?

Keep it up, though. You're an awesome writer from what I've seen so far.
mercedes valentine chapter 1 . 10/9/2000
Good start, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest
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