Author is Definitely a local! Although I thought the most of the way to Belfair drive-in was on AM the rest of this is exactly spot on, especially how real drive-in veterans park & bring a boom box so the stereo isn't backwards and you don't have to restart your engine to recharge your battery during intermission.

"Any where else in the country people would probably be dressed for rain." I love this because it's so true! Around here there are times when I don't notice that it's damp until some one out of town makes a comment about wet it is. And on the other end of the rain spectrum is the windshield wiper CAN NOT keep up. Yes it is a real thing.

I can't believe Bella got sex-advice from Jessica...telling her private information about Edward in the process. Oh well. I liked the humorous parts, Bella and Edward teaching sex-ed together. She seemed like a College student, Edward was a great instructor regardless. They were very sweet. I don't know about Bella asking where and how he wants it. What he wanted her to wear etc., made her sound like a professional rather than his girlfriend making love to him. Hopefully next time it will just happen naturally.

I love beaches. As long as there are lots of blankets, privacy and warmth.

Oh I loved this chapter. It was definately smile worthy and feel-good throughout especially when they got caught making-out on Bella's couch by Charlie.

This chapter made me smile...repeatedly.

Oh my...he really is adorable.

They seem very similar, personalities, education, dating histories, book-synopsis-knowledge, careers...yet as sweet as they were with each other they were a bit formal with each other as well. I know this is technically their first date and Edward is a perfect gentleman possibly from his boy's-prep-school upbringing but they obviously like each other so why Bella's comment to take things slow? Sure they don't need to jump into bed on the first date, but taking it slow suggests to me a lack of trust as to whether they should be together romantically. Could it be that they decided this so as to not ruin their budding friendship shoos a romantic match not be in the cards? I guess that was what Bella was trying to say. All it would take is one of them falling for the other and then just friendship wouldn't be an option anyway. I have a feeling I don't have to worry about that with these two, though.

I wonder is Jasper gay or Bi; because if he's Bi in eight years maybe if he runs into Alice somewhere...anyways. It's hard to think of Angela and Ben and Jasper and Alice not together. Like the friendship developing between Ed and Bella

Good talk, although I kind of get the idea Bella would like their new alliance to be moving a little faster and in the romance direction rather than the friendship one. I have to say, even if it's true Angela and Bella gossiping about Jessica's sexlife in front of the new guy-Edward wasn't very nice of them at all.

Way to go Edward!

OMG, he got me at " get in the back seat". Thanks for the fantabulous story!

Oh man... you really exceed yourself with this chapter, awesome first I love yous!

I like the way love is growing on them. Great chapter!

Edward is actually sweet and generous. The perfect date for Bella!