Reviews for I Win, You Lose
Kimmie3 chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
ooh! creepy hojo poem! I cannot get enough of these poems! i liked this very much! It was so morbid a spine-tingly (i dont think that is a word). The last four lines were extremely effective. Because, as it stands, vincent will be a victim forever. as long as he hates hojo and thirsts for more revenge, he will be only giving hojo power. Loved this alot! cannot not express how much I adore your writing!

Metallicafangirl chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
Is it just me, or is Hojo scary? Anyway, I loved this, it's totally awesome. Especally the last two lines:

But I have four words for you

I win, you lose

That was so good. It's really dark, it's totally awesome, what more can I say?
ValkyrieDown chapter 1 . 3/24/2003
I have always wanted to review this poem. I happened across it about a year and a half ago on another smaller website, and have sice been looking for it again. It's about time I looked here! This has to be my most favorite Fan poem for any genre, any game. It fits so completely perfectly... and now that I know that you're here, I'll look for more of you! I definitely hope to be seeing LOTS more of you.
Lobo Kendo chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
I wonder if I've ever reviewed this poem before. Probably not, and I do apologize. It is beyond excellent. This is what other poets should strive to accomplish. Bravo!
Missanga chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
Hoji is such a #$%& #$% &*, isn't he? but evil is cool, as that morbid poem was touching. sad, in a way. i'm such a softie, aren't i?
Skivverus chapter 1 . 9/17/2002
Not bad... nice, long, vivid, powerful, and true to form.

A few places where the rhythm is a bit off though; maybe that's to be expected in a poem that long, but I like to think rhyme enhances rhythm rather than the other way around (that feels like a lot of R's...). I was thinking that for starters you could look at lines 5-6 and rework those, they're kind of unwieldy.

Good work.
Dreamless chapter 1 . 9/3/2002
Scary...I feel strange...
The Dying Poet chapter 1 . 8/28/2002
A spiffing poem to be read over pizza rolls and apple juice. It was almost cynical, Hojo sounds kinda mocking...awseome poem. Hojo stuff is the icing on my cake at the end of the day, he's the mad scientist of my life. *sighs* Psychotic, cynical, and f***8*ed up. Write more poetry, it's an original style, even.
Hakusan chapter 1 . 8/22/2002
hey that was a good poem.
Ace Toshi chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
wow. this was good. i really liked it. i win, you lose...i say that to everyone i hate when i beat them at something. and i frighten them too. very good perspective of Hojo. chilling. it was good.
Shinra-261 chapter 1 . 5/22/2002
WHOA. That was heavy. It had a sort of 'rap' sound to it, but that made it better. The wording was fantastic. Im a bit of a Hojo fan but, hat was frightening. A demon with no salvation indeed. I actually FELT what Vincents hopelessness might've been like if Hojo's word were true, and who knows if they aren't?
InterfaceLeader chapter 1 . 5/20/2002
Why do I like this so much? I thought I hated poetry ;; Great great great work. Did I mention great?
justincaselkfd chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
You are soo good at poems! You should write more! And please write more Sink! *
Kell4077 chapter 1 . 3/17/2002
Woo-hoo! I know I've already read this at your site, but I just had to read it again! It's still as awesome and *shudders* CREEPY as I remember it! And it rhymes! Vincent ROCKS! Hojo's EVIL! Catalina you're AWESOME!
QueenV chapter 1 . 1/6/2002
Woah...that was amazing! You captured Hojo and Vincent so very well in this poem. It's kinda scary to think about isn't it...Vinny's going to be the only one left cause everyone else will live their normal life-span and then die. As if he didn't have *enough* suffering and loneliness...*sniffles* Poor Vinny. Great poem!
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