Reviews for Battle of the thoughtful raven
cc2pg2c2v2c chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I loved the tone of this work. It started out sad but then moved to sweet and hopeful with a nice smooth transition. You did a great job also with the description of the setting. You gave a general idea with a couple of details without smothering the reader in trivia. Overall this was very good. :)
discb chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I like it, Rae must feel awful to have all that power yet not able to save any though. /