Reviews for Overpass
Mell C chapter 8 . 10/9/2013
Enjoying this story. Like Bella, it's basic but has all the good stuff. Nothing superfluous or showy. Just deep feeling. I sense a major heartbreak ahead.
I don't always like alternating timelines, but yours is so well done. It's building anticipation. And my sense of dread.
nanai27 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Wonderful!... Waiting for the epi... ;)
robchris chapter 14 . 9/1/2013
Excellent
foxylady1on1 chapter 14 . 8/20/2013
Loved it all, thank you. xx
debslmac chapter 14 . 8/19/2013
:) loved this story
effleurage chapter 8 . 8/15/2013
Wow, your story makes me sentimental for my high school days. The undefined boyfriend, the music, the clothes, the mood. Yeah, I remember those times. Thanks for taking me back. This is a good read.
SandytheSandstorm chapter 14 . 8/7/2013
I enjoyed the climb. their hearts were never at peace nor complacent. Love that the majority of the story was the building of a friendship that lead to kissing.. One night of passion or their entire relationship was passionate. Thx
BellaRoseBelikov chapter 14 . 8/4/2013
another wonderful story!
Vagabonda chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
Well done. So well done. Please write an epi?
thedreadedlurgy chapter 14 . 7/29/2013
perfect ending. perfect story. fanfiction has never made me almost cry before. wow. bravo. seriously.
thedreadedlurgy chapter 13 . 7/29/2013
You're great
thedreadedlurgy chapter 8 . 7/28/2013
what did edward do to make her mad at him in 2008? so curious. bet it has to do with relapsing.
thedreadedlurgy chapter 6 . 7/28/2013
truly i love this story
thedreadedlurgy chapter 5 . 7/28/2013
i love how you portray them
thedreadedlurgy chapter 4 . 7/28/2013
you will be a writer of an amazing book someday, if you aren't already. i really believe it.
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