Reviews for Overpass
enamoramiento chapter 4 . 1/26/2013
Youre right, Carlisles petulance over Jasper was marvelous :o)
And Edward is just... swoon-worthy...
cabal22 chapter 4 . 1/26/2013
So much emotion in one chapter. Excellent :)
enamoramiento chapter 3 . 1/26/2013
*sigh* I have a date next week with the "boy" who introduced me to Pearl Jam back in 1994. We were also high a lot of the time, then :oD I wonder if hes changed, but somehow I dont think so...
I like that Bellas pseudo-family isnt all unicorns and roses and perfect like the Cullens so often are portrayed. How long has it been since Alices brothers died? They seem quite "put together" for having experienced a tragedy like that...
sfspeedy chapter 4 . 1/26/2013
Terrific, thank you!
Shlebbie chapter 4 . 1/26/2013
I finally caught up on this. I really like this story. These two are so cute together. They are so broken and it makes me sad but happy they have each other. I'm a little pissed at Alice right now but I get it, too. Can't wait to see how this goes but I have a feeling it will not be an easy 10 years!
Me chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
TexasTwilight77 chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Head over heels in love with this fic! You're doing an amazing job with it. ;)
Raewright chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Yup. Carlisle is awesome. Alice is...a teenage girl. Can't really expect more. lol
alli62 chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
My new current favorite story! You did it! And it only took you four chapters.

It's so good. I await the next update anxiously. Lol
Guiltypleasure30plus chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
I get when you are in love for the first time, especially when it's teenage, high school love your friends take a backseat, but that was just callous on Alice's part. Also she is being kind of selfish- she wants her relationship w/ Jasper but Bella getting closer to Edward, some how that is disrespectful to her.

It's cute that even though Edward warns Bella that he is no good, he clearly wants her. When he entwines his fingers with hers or when she tells him about Riley and how they were good friends and she wanted more and Edward gazes at her and says he knows- awww.
Cullenosopy chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Yo yourself. Carlisle is pretty cool. I'm sure it helps him and Esme to have extra kids around.

chicalicious chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Yea, I dont blame Bella for being upset with Alice. It's nice that she can bond with Carlisle over their mutual dislike for Jasper. I don't really blame Alice for being upset with Bella either, it is kind of odd that she had a thing for her brother Riley and now for her cousin Edward. I do love the way Edward takes care of Bella though.

IccaSpriggs chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Wow! I'm crying for them all. Bella and Edward are so alike and I love this connection between them. And shame on Alice! She needs to see what's happening. I hope that Bella doesn't pull away. She's going to need Alice soon.
I was happy for more Carlisle.
Thanks for sharing.
namemeamy chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Carlisle is pretty cool; Liked the car analogy. Tho seems like Bella has nudged her head a little under Edward's hood. Okay, that sounded weird! What I mean is, Bella needs someone, Edward too so this is interesting.
DreamerRoad chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
Yeah, that Carlisle chat was kind of perfect. A little honesty, a little humor, and the friendly face that Bella needed in that moment. And, you captured a teenager in love perfectly with Alice. I lived on both sides of that fence and I remember being just as clueless on one side and just as hurt on the other.

You also know how to make me fall for an Edward... between their sweet interaction on the couch, to his chasing after her and giving her his hoodie and shoes? *sigh* Won me over.

Really good emotional charge in this chapter...
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