Reviews for Overpass
HiraFrance chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I'm already hooked guys ;)
SunflowerFran chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
...More please...update frequently...
singlegrlmusing chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
I'm loving the dynamic you've created between these two, great banter. Curious to know what's going on in present day.
SunflowerFran chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Oh...I remember this one! So happy you are continuing...
DreamerRoad chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
Throw-away kids... gets me right in the heart.

I am completely interested in these two kids - and this family assembled around them.
DreamerRoad chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I am invested in this Bella after only a few words. Looking forward to reading more.
Erikajo chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
Love the way they give each other crap. :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
Their both throwaways, something in common, to bond over.

Me chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
Guest chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
I love these two. Can't wait for more.
loulou-29 chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
Ok, so Bella is in town because of a high school reunion? Nice. I wonder how that will go, if she has kept in touch will her friends, Edward...

I like Edward & Bella interactions. They're written perfectly – with funny and honest moments.

Their past were complicated I think... It will be sad to read maybe sometime, but I'm looking forward to it. )
loulou-29 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I like it so far. Your writing is great. The characters seems interesting, as the plot. I'm guessing Riley was Alice's brother, maybe a type of boyfriend for Bella... but not sure. Thanks for sharing.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Loving the new story and didn't even know I read it backwards lol..I'm a dork.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Interesting start with these two lost souls.
LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Ah, I love their relationship already and they don't really know each other yet? So, I guess they "played" together as little kids. It always makes me so freaking sad when I read about a child who is neglected at home and I certainly can't imagine leaving my child and never looking back. Ugh! Well at least she's had Alice.
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