Reviews for A KaguMoko School Story
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 9 . 2/22/2013
Like the Sun and the Moon, Kaguya is Mokou's yin, and vise-versa...

This was a very short and satisfying tail of dramatic angst and criminal intrigue starring two of Touhou's most awesome and long-haired rivals...

Congratulations on a job well done, and for those angsty scenes with these two...The character development is excellent, given the length, and the conclusion is Touhou-ish as a can be...Especially that last part mentioning a certain shady doctor...
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 8 . 2/21/2013
Now I can imagine a certain deceased sleuth with a manly beard and laughing his head off...That said, it was a very smart move to do something like that ( and by that I mean, it takes some flaming steel balls)...

I cannot wait to see the look on Osamu's face when all of this is explained to him...Arguably, he should have just hired a goon to do the deed...

Looking forward to how this all wraps up...
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 7 . 2/21/2013
Well that letter was hella sad, but man, was it written quite well...Mokou's reaction and acceptance is befitting for someone like her with a strong character and conviction...

Kaguya may or may not have known it would lead to this, but she did play a part in the demise of Mr. Fujiwara...

Kudos on this chapter, as well as the letter...
Timeskipper1 chapter 8 . 2/21/2013
Damn, Ol' man Fujiwara was smart...
Well, what to say? A filthy Yakuza getting his just desserts? I certainly hope so.
Well, I imagined that the story couldn't end like that, and that Osamu would have some trouble... but you pulled it out magnificently.
Timeskipper1 chapter 7 . 2/21/2013
Yeah, Mokou, great idea, accept the dinner invitation of the daughter of the Yakuza boss who just killed your father. I'm sure nothing will go wrong!

Daaamn, I saw this coming but it's still hard.
Ascoeur chapter 6 . 2/2/2013
:3
Ascoeur chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
hmm love it it
Timeskipper1 chapter 6 . 2/2/2013
The situation looks bad. Couldn't expect much more from Kaguya. She's really her father's daughter. Now I'm just hoping that she'll get what she deserves, along with that bastard of her father.
And really, Mokou seems too calm about all this story. I hope she's secretly planning on murdering Kaguya's father...
And damn, Tohohana isn't a nice place. I hate to say it, but it reminds me of my old Naples...
Really, Tohohana could really use a certain police chief from a certain series that takes place in Sicily... bah, I'm digressing.
Timeskipper1 chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
Just hoping Mr. Houraisan gets thrown into jail for life. In a 0,5 x 0,5 square meters cell. Constantly flashed by strobe lights, with "I Love You, You Love Me" constantly playing. A little excessive? Maybe. I just happen to strongly dislike Mafiosos, Yakuzas and similar scum.
Other than this, nice chapter. Though I'd have expected Mokou to be furious about that. Or Kaguya to start feeling at least uneasy with her father's "job".
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 6 . 2/2/2013
Bloody hell, it looks like Mokou is in deep sh*t, and his old man too is going to be joining her all thanks to her venomous study partner...

Then again, Mokou should not have blabbed in front of our long-haired lunar NEET...

And yes, the bittersweet scene at the end made me want to smash some Yakuza heads...Kudos on that by the way

*goes off to play "Yakuza 4" to vent off some steam*
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
I am surprised Mokou was not wholly upset at Kaguya's father for killing her mother in this chapter with this surprise...Putting 2 and 2 together, Kaguya's personality is pretty much a result of this past incident, but then again, she may just be tsun-tsun...

Great job on that little revelation...Now on to the next chapter...
Ascoeur chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
*being too lazy to sign in*

OMG I LOVE THIS! PLEASE KEEP UPDATING!
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 4 . 1/22/2013
First off, I can see the great tie-in with your other story involving another troublemaker...

I am quite happy to see a great amount of interaction between our honorable haku-taku and Moko-tan...

You really have fleshed this out a bit, and I am pretty much smiling at their whole conversation in the later half...

Kudo on another great chapter of KaguMoko...

(P.S. I lol'ed every time the principal got yelled at by Keine)
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Any old fool that can burn the simplest of food is a kind-hearted soul...That said, I am also praising this chapter for making Teruyo and Moko-tan have a kindred love to one of the greatest and manliest anime of all time...

You are also right on the money with how you made Mokou here...She (amongst some choice others) is pretty much a malleable and flexible character to work on, as well as being someone a lot of people can relate to...

Kudos on a great chapter (and for making me somehow picture Guan Yu as Kaguya's dad for some strange reason...Must be the long beard contrasting with Kaguya's long hair)...
Timeskipper1 chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Bad, bad UnendingEmpire, no praising yourself in the author's notes :P
Anyways, nice chapter, though I'd have expected Mokou to be a little more upset about the fact that Kaguya's dad is a yakuza boss. Especially since she's the daughter of a cop.
It just... makes me nervous. Other than that, though, good job.
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