Reviews for Children of the Underworld
Novy chapter 13 . 4/3
How do you limit your writing so well?
2FaceMyFate chapter 34 . 3/15
Hi. So I know this fic is kinda old but I ran across it while doing research for a possible OUaT fic that included Hades's kids. I really enjoyed reading it. I like your spin on things. Very imaginative and touching.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7
good job
Yoruichi86 chapter 34 . 10/12/2015
I like that each pregnancy is completely different than the others, different place and story. Great job!
Ted chapter 34 . 7/25/2015
Melinoe is older than Zagreus? I think he is the older brother of Melinoe.
Bella chapter 34 . 7/25/2015
Ukm, excuse me! I think, Melinoe a child of Persephone and Zeus.
Bella chapter 34 . 7/25/2015
Sarah Harrington chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Hi could you send me a full copy of your boo to read off line, as I enjoyed reading the first chapter

Guest chapter 33 . 5/25/2015
who is older
Goddess of Spring-Gems chapter 11 . 4/18/2015
IKR! I love your version. I hate to think that Melinoe and Zagreus are from Persephone and Zeus by rape.
LOVEYDOVE RYOSAKU chapter 11 . 4/14/2015
hades and persephone is my fav story and i love your stories of them ,
holamor chapter 34 . 2/16/2015
I have literally been scraping the bottom of the bucket looking for a story about Hades and Persephone 's children and this is beyond what I expected! You write so wonderfully and vividly, I'm so sad that I read through the whole thing in a little less than an hour. Thank you!
EndlessChains chapter 34 . 2/12/2015
Well done story on being able to write about the birth of Hades children. Liked how you went through all three and that they were born in different areas. The last child was quite the problem and the drama was welcomed that is for sure. The first and second not a problem but Demeter didn't like the idea of being taken behind her back. The love the two showed was just endearing and makes me love the couple even more. Thank you. Keep up the good work
NyankoSenpai chapter 34 . 1/29/2015
That was beautiful
Guest chapter 34 . 12/15/2014
its so cute!
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