|Reviews for Halla's Choice|
| sandradee27 chapter 38 . 3/1
Love love love! Keep it up! And I hope shatauz gets bregan! And Narzum gets Edwyn! Hehehehe and finnan should get no one! Much love
| Ragdoll-Homicide chapter 38 . 1/8
Gee, that is one amazing and hot story! I love it. Please please continue, I'm craving for more right now!
| Sovereignty3 chapter 38 . 11/27/2013
Goes to read the next chapter and finds no next chapter. (make noise of angry kitten who is frustrated and wants to be bottle fed, ( mum runs a cat rescue group and little Angel should be call little devil and she make the noise all the time. Then drinks a mouth full and stops, squirms and repeats.)
More more more!
| Nandadevi chapter 38 . 10/29/2013
Fffuuuck I was hoping this was finished when I started. Loving it. Hoping you're still updating. It's just getting to the reaaally interesting parts now. I appreciate how you write the sex scenes. It's great to see not just missionary position lol
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/10/2013
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| LordofGoats chapter 38 . 8/26/2013
An excellent story, which I very much enjoyed, is there going to be more? Or was that the end of it?
| LordofGoats chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
Ooo! I like it, I am getting very drawn in by the story.
| SunLux chapter 38 . 8/21/2013
This is a great story! Please update, pretty pretty please! I can't wait to read about Bregun and Shatauz! Your characterization is amazing and very well developed. I love your perspective and I hope you finish the story.
| Guest chapter 38 . 8/1/2013
Ooooooo... What happens next? Im hookd, plz update soon!
| Gmuraz chapter 38 . 7/25/2013
You're not gonna update that fic anymore?
| evillives4evr chapter 38 . 7/6/2013
AHHHHHHH! Please write more! The characterisation in this story is astounding and utterly believable. I love the story arc and each of it's elements . This story provokes strong emotions from the reader and emerges them completely in the world I have been hook on this store since I started reading it last night... and I need more! I have love this from start till now enjoying each little moment and cherishing it. I really hope they can each get a mate of their choosing and expand and be safe Looking to see what happens next :D
| evillives4evr chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
Love this story so far. It makes sense that her ignorance of the world and of sex and love would draw her to think homosexuality abominable, simply that because it is unknown to her and that it has been used against her personally and she would find fault with it. Not not mention that it may be taboo in middle earth to be gay. I just hope that they come to an understanding and compromise and she snaps out of her childish bigotry and he snaps out of his selfish cold demeanour. I hope the compromise benefits both parties and they can each be with who they love and still have the benefits that comes with their marriage. Leading to sexy Uruk-hai times ;P.
| Borys68 chapter 17 . 6/9/2013
I don't like the part below:
[ ... he took me to a little room with…" Maukurz closed his eyes. "With a girl. He said, 'this is much sweeter, and not near as much trouble. You will like this most of all. Take her, and when she's done in, if you do her good I'll give you another.' And he watched me… fucking—raping—those little girls. And all I could think was how good it felt and how good my Master was to me… that and wondering why, seein' as he liked it so much—and I got a nose for that shit, Halla, believe me—why he didn't join in himself. He only touched me a little. Examining, he called it. And then he put me in with the others. Said we were the best of the best, and there would be good sport for us as soon as we had a little training with our weapons. You can imagine the rest, I think."
Maukurz sighed heavily, chancing a glance at Halla's face, terrified she would be looking at him with those same broken eyes she turned on him after the woman from his past showed up in the hayshed. And sure enough, Halla was crying, silent tears pouring down her face. "I'm sorry," he groaned, "I'm so fucking sorry, you asked… You said tell—"
"Shh…" Halla whispered, laying her fingers softly against his lips. "It's all right… I'm so sorry, Maukurz. I hadn't imagined… that you'd been so… so abused."
"Trained," Maukurz breathed harshly. "It… it set me up good all right… But I liked it all well enough after that, Halla. I don't make no excuses for myself. I've hurt a whole world of people. Women, mostly, but not all."
"I'm so glad you're away from him… from that monster… I would kill him for what he did to you, my love!"]
She should be puking her guts out, and not going "bad, bad, naughty Evil! Wizard! Let me boink he hurts away!"
| ninkakuul chapter 38 . 5/24/2013
Eeee! I want to know what happens with Bregun and Shatauz and the saving of the she-Ork!
| Borys68 chapter 37 . 5/13/2013
Prolly some of our Ma's is Dunlending
Very well done illustration of the dawning of the concept of family - even if the FUH are grasping for terminology here.