|Reviews for Only Stars on my Paws|
| Moonbeam141 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
| ponyiowa chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
[She had been hunting with her apprentice, Rainsong.]
I think you meant to say "Glasspaw" instead of "Rainsong" there.
["Good job, Rainsong." a new voice said.]
["Good job, Rainsong," a new voice said.]
I don't think there are any other mistakes in here other than that, and if there are, I have forgotten about them. :)
She hardly got to actually work on her resolution before Glasspaw came to her. Also, I doubt cats would know what humans call glass, so if she came to the Clans, they would have changed the name, but it doesn't take off many points. ;)
The ending was a bit short, but I like it. Nice job. :)
-Nightstar of WillowClan
| The Last Moongazer chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Awwww...*sniff* That was absolutely adorable. Says so much about letting go of the past, and moving on. I really loved it. Good job!