Reviews for The Lie in your Truth
littlesprout chapter 16 . 10/25/2014
Glad to see your back!?
Love the chapter, thanks for updating
violetkitty02 chapter 16 . 10/23/2014
Glad you're back! Great story!
harrysgurl22 chapter 8 . 10/23/2014
I just started reading your story today, I am so sorry for the senseless loss of your family members, you and your family will be in my prayers. God bless
AnetteRuby chapter 16 . 10/22/2014
Marvelous story...captivating plot...
Here are a few ideas...use any that you like, all, none, your chice. I ask for nothing in return.
Here we go
- Blaize and Julian seem to like Lyra... they both agree to start courting her anonimously ...like sending gifts, letters and so on...and see who she picks
-Blaize at the moment seems a bit attached to Draco...after the talk with Leo, Blaize could become Leo's right hand, and secretly assigned to protect Draco
-Dumbledore forces Snape to brew a potion that he puts in Harry's food, it's untraceable...after all if you destroy the leader of the group it's too easy ...after a few days Harry has frequent headaches, he feels nauseous, dizzy, forgets things, cold sweats...his food is containing a powerfull drug ...he could make it so all the school will have a medical chack..if they find the drug in Harry's blood he will be sent to Mungos to fix his addiction...leaving the group without a leader...Zabini could figure the withdrawal symptoms...
-Lucius sends Draco a letter that the dark lord wants him marked in the next meeting...
-Blaize suggests all of them visit Gringotts to sort through their vaults, they are under the suspicion that someone is stealing their money...mainly Dumbledore...
-Draco talks to Lucius about the groups plans and he supports them...as a result he makes a new law for werewolves and sends a recomandation to Hogwarts to hire Remus as a teacher...that way they have extra people to support and protect them...
-Goyle and Crabbe attack Lyra...guess who's going to make their corpses dissapear...
-Poopy-the healer it's not on their side so they need to find someone on their side...so the girl of their group that is good at healing asks an aprenticeship with her-that way she gets info on some of Dumbledore's plans and spawns also she looks for persons that might be on their side...they all could try to attach themselves to a teacher so they can get leaked info...

-So far they have: Leo-leader; Julian strategist; Millicent,Tracey,Daphne-ears and gossip spreaders, charms experts and healer; Carina and Nott-information finders; Lyra-Riot leader, prankster, mayhem bringer and perfect decoy at times;
You could add: Snape-as a potion master, but only that he only supplies them he's not activelly participating; Blaize- mafia extraordinaire has connections and knows everything on the black market, knows creative ways to torture for information; Remus- a sort of psychologist, father figure also helps when they're at odds;
Anyway...enjoy creating!
Pikachu79 chapter 16 . 10/21/2014
Someone must stop the Headmaster before he is contagious, or is that too late?! I look foreword to the next chapter.
mizzrazz72 chapter 15 . 7/16/2014
Smith will be missing something soon or he will be in the hospital soon.
Lori94 chapter 15 . 7/16/2014
Very interesting. I hope to see more soon!
Azrael1225 chapter 14 . 7/15/2014
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Kemet's Queen chapter 3 . 7/5/2014
I loved it. Harry or Leo is now getting his famliy.
igotmoneymoney chapter 14 . 7/4/2014
love it
daithi4377 chapter 13 . 6/3/2014
Okay the rest of the group is right the two guys need to shag lol. If Leo every finds out Sirius part in this Sirius best turn into Padfoot and wish her was a greyhound instead of a grim lol.
daithi4377 chapter 11 . 6/3/2014
Well wasn't expecting that but it was hilarious to read. Leo is damned if he does and damned if he doesn't.
daithi4377 chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
Sirius gave Draco some good advice. Draco now has him all shook up will be interesting to see whether he is going to get shagged or beaten up.
daithi4377 chapter 7 . 6/3/2014
Poor Leo he doesn't stand a chance does he lol.
daithi4377 chapter 6 . 6/3/2014
Pissing Leo off doesn't seem so smart...sucks that Neville isn't on Leo's side that a first. What about Luna?
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