Reviews for Shalom, Shalom
Loverofallthingsmusic chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Beautiful story! Amazing job! :)
mon-petit-pois chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
Can I just say that this is perfect?
dvd123 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
This is beautiful and this different povs work extremely well.
agentscully6 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
oh wow, this is not what I expected! but so good!
BrightGrey chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
Loved the format and especially loved Ziva's section with the bit about Somalia- I hadn't thought of that. Also the end was totally in character with her still looking out but taking his hand. I could totally see that happening. Thank you and well done, if that doesn't sound patronising! (I'm not very good at reviews!) :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Beautifully written, conveying the emotions of each of them.
alexcullen1 chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
I love this! Short but the way it's told is very very cool
BrightGrey chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Wow. Just wow. Superb writing. Amazing.
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
I am crying again.


Good bits for each of them.

1Styx and Stones1 chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
OhmyGOSH this is so good.

Such a fan of the parentheses. The formatting was short and clipped and it made everything feel tense and a little in-shock, which was so true to life.

The last line. *bawls*

Well done. Favoriting :)
natsien chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Wonderful - perfectly portrayed :)
mel60 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
This was awesome! Great job with little snippets of heartbreak. Hope tomorrow's episode sparks more...
agentscully6 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
oh, this is masterful! thank you! I have watched this scene many times now from Tony's POV. It took several times to notice that in the first shot, he is NOT standing still. watch his hands. he is in major distress. I think after all he has been through, including watching Kate's death, this is the worst thing he has ever seen. and you got it.
Susan M. M chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Feels right, feels real.
Mechabeira chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Stunning, shocking, stark. Beautiful. Excellent sense of craft. Brava.
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