Reviews for Sequestered
Jesseburnett chapter 9 . 6/12
i absolutely love the dynamic of emma trying to take it slow and regina trying to coax her into sex. its so adorable to read. just so you know, im not afraid to gripe about things i dont like about a story. for the writers benefit, of course _. but i can honestly find nothing wrong with this awesome story.
Jesseburnett chapter 8 . 6/12
my god your loving making scenes are so descriptive! you really get inside the characters heads and truly take it step by step! even professional authors are nowhere near as good as you are! aand im serious, most of the stuff ive read in novels is so robotic, like they just relate the motions, like your just watchin a porno or somethin. your writing is so amazing, it really astounds me. so far there's nothing but heavy petting and grinding, and it still gets me very aroused to be completely honest. you really are an amazing writer
Jesseburnett chapter 5 . 6/11
I can really tell you've put a lot of effort into this fic. every chapter is very charmin and entertaining. and that massage scene was 30 hotter than any smut I've ever read. tyvm for writing this awesome story
Jesseburnett chapter 1 . 6/11
wow. i think i was wanting emma to go lower even more than regina was! DAMN THAT DELIVERY MAN!
Jesseburnett chapter 4 . 6/11
the bailiff fist bumping emma because of her 'game' when it comes to regina was so hilarious XD i laughed pretty good
Jesseburnett chapter 2 . 6/11
she feels like a lion tamer with the brunette next door XD lmao. story is still great, thx for writing it
Jesseburnett chapter 1 . 6/11
jeez, doesnt regina realise all she needs to do to fall asleep is masturbate? XD especially with whst is keeping her up! great story so far, just like your other that i read
Guest chapter 20 . 4/20
Awesome story.
Audalia chapter 3 . 2/8
you are awesome! this is awesome
weezycray chapter 20 . 1/23
sweet!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16
Pretty good thus far.
alicenisomsbaby chapter 20 . 1/17
OK boo, may or may not will not do. You know and I know this story needs an end. Don't play with me girl. Get with the sequel. I understand you're busy, and it may be a while but we need a sequel. We need to know what Emma gets up to in storybook. How the town reacts to her and Regina. Her relationship with Henry. How Regina explained the town/curse/enchanted forest/ fairytales/ Snow and Charming being her parents. OK you may not want to do a sequel, and nobody else may not want you to do a sequel, but "I" need closure. Pleeeeeeeeeeese?
Guest chapter 20 . 1/15
Great story. :)
alicenisomsbaby chapter 6 . 1/16
Great chapter. Totally agree about the show. If they don't get there act together, no more once upon a time.
alicenisomsbaby chapter 3 . 1/16
good stuff.
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