Reviews for Something Shone
Dee chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I found this while I was reviewing another story you wrote. I enjoyed the other one so much I had to read this one. I'm going to go ahead and say that you made me cry. To see a Ben and Jimmy that grew old together and only death could separate them for a little while made me happy and overwhelmed at what might of been. I can't help but think that Jimmy never really left Ben's side even after he passed away. That Jimmy was quietly taking every step with Ben waiting for him to finally cross over to him so that they could explore what's next for them together "reborn" as the young men they were when they first fell in love.
WhisperMaw chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
The concept of this was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The last paragraph could not have been improved. It was flawless. Earlier however, grammatically, it was a little hard to follow without the use of quotations and there were missing words here and there that a quick read through would solve. Overall I really enjoyed this. Thank you.
engel17white chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
I did not understand
Did you explain, please?