Reviews for The Flaws of Fire
Kairocksrainbow chapter 5 . 7/6/2016
That's okay. ;) I love your work. :) Anyways, Hope you update soon!
queenofpranking chapter 5 . 10/22/2015
I feel you. Im the same age and im still looking for a job as well. Good luck!
Guest chapter 5 . 10/18/2015
I'm sorry you've been through all that. Know you aren't the only one. One way or another people( teens mainly) go through big hardships for some reason. I don't want to grow up and I have body-image issues and all that depressing stuff but slowly I am learning to deal with it. I know you will too(with the problems you are facing). As for moving from Washington to Oregon,know you will settle in in Oregon. I myself live in Oregon and its a great place to live. There are nice people,nature here is beautiful, all that. Its very mellow and not much happens here. Back to the point,I know you'll get used to Oregon. College is a big step, and even I,who just started 9th grade 2 months ago am stressing about it. So you aren't the only one there either. Just remember you've got people by your side,and if you feel like you don't,you can get through it alone. Because your strong. And if you think otherwise don't. Everyone feels weak at certain points but truly they aren't. Same with you. God is always with you so your not alone :) remember that you are loved too :)

God bless,
Cpkenzie chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
I love your story keep writing it when will you update!
Ninjago-Yoai chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
WEWO chapter 4 . 5/22/2014
Will you update?
Guest chapter 4 . 12/26/2013
This was so perfect you need to continue this
defyingthegravity chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
This is so adorable :D
love the storey chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
(idea) kai wants to take the relationship to the next level but cole is scared to ... because he's never been in a relationship or had a real love/crush?

love, your fan
Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2013
Yay. All I can say to this is yay.
Ninjago1019 chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
Hahahaha Jay! Awesome! BTW!
guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
plz update plz...
guest chapter 3 . 3/14/2013
let nya interrupt them talking. it leaves cole curious to the question that kai didn't answer then later in the story let kai and cole discuss their feeling and let them have and war problems . the war is on the missions and kai being overprotective. that's all i got hope you use the idea :)
guest chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
please continue... please... please
Ravonic the UnderWorlder chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Wow my friend this is so awesome please update soon and good luck.
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