|Reviews for Sage of Fairy Tail|
| watson85 chapter 4 . 1/24
can't waite for more sage of fairytale to be posted keep up the good work and good luck with school
| jabbarulez chapter 4 . 10/22/2013
yeah exams suck... especially once you get into college!
| napsterman23 chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
what a great xover rate it a 9
| Shattering chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
I fucking hate when he spills his beans at the beginning. Where is the thrill in that? Dude tell me!
The story is kinda linear in my opinion. You should make him more like a ninja not a damn civilian who can't hold a secret.
| firehelm chapter 4 . 9/3/2013
update please. Thank you
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
this is great keep up the good work :)
| PurpleLovingCutePineappleDork chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
Blah! I like this story only to find it at a dead end? Eh, well, I can wait. Update soon, please?
| Jdog15 chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
oh man, i liked where that was going too, oh well, good story and i hope you continue it :)
| readme-silly chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
Too many things to comment about. Only experience can teach you the lessons I'd want to share.
| readme-silly chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
If you really want to describe clothing then it's better to do it as part of a character's observations, sometimes with an opinion thrown in. It doesn't have to be complimentary, the opinion could be scathing, insulting or plain hilarious.
Never think about power levels as you write. If you have a goal in mind beforehand then the powers will be a mere afterthought. What really matters is the impact you intend to make with them. That way you won't have to scramble to include filler chapters describing training and whatnot.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
Good luck with your exams
| kurifu gari chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
This is a awsome story I hope a new chapter shows up soon
| Starter chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
I was just reading this story, have to say it's good though to bad it's not going to be your major focus
| Cerulean Knight chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
I've read your other two stories and this one they are all good and while two of them are shorter than the other they are quick to get to the action. If Erza is in the pairing and only three others can be picked the I think you should use Mirajane, Cana, & Ultear or Edolas Wendy. Mirajane and Erza are rivals so it would be funny to see them argue even though their friends, Cana is kinda laid back and it would be funny to see Gilitards reaction to Naruto being in a relationship with his daughter plus her card magic has lots of possibilities(think about Gambit from X-men), Ultear has political power since she's on the council and her time and ice magic are cool plus she's cute when she's not acting like a deranged loony toon, as for edolas Wendy well she's the sky dragonslayer and I think they underpowered her I mean she has power over things in the sky right lasf I checked when storms appear they come from the sky, besides that all those girls are hot. And if you don't wanna use one of them or Erza just use Erza Knightwalker, she's a bad girl and looks like a sexy badass while doing it. Would that be a challenge at all for you, to put both Erza's in Naruto's harem?
| Kratos Pendragon chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
Well I'm glad that you are going to continue this story because it is very good!