Reviews for Daughter of a Phantom |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i just realized how aggravating everyone is for demanding answers to danny. like the AUDACITY. they dont even deserve to ask with the eay they (this includes valerie) approached him and dani. and the Fenton's trying to parent in public, why not focus on your own children. its non of their business why he has a kid. Danny shouldve questioned them instead tbh. arent they scientists? like how did they know for sure ghosts ar emotionless and cant have kids? have they tried being one? shit got me worked up fr |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Dp-Marvel94, I am back once again and eager as ever to see what you have in store for me this time with your story "Summoning". I just hope Jack and Maddie summon the RIGHT Ghost King with this Ceremony. Because I am sure the last thing they want is an Ecto/Ghost Invasion on their hands. I may not have a clue what Language Maddie is reciting the Spell in, but If I had to guess, I would say probably Latin. And it also reminds me of Gwen Tennyson reciting spells in the "Ben 10" Franchise. Oh Boy, Danny's caught in the Summoning Circle. I am just glad that Jack is accepting of Danny being a Ghost. (Actually Half-Ghost but you know what I mean). Saying Maddie taking all this information in a very difficult way (so to speak) would be a Major Understatement. The moment the barrier was gone and Danny was able to hug his loving parents was so touching. (Just wish Jazz was here to join in the loving family moment). I am not Surprised that Danny beating Pariah Dark (The Ghost King) made Danny the Next Ghost King of The Ghost Zone. Since I've always thought that. (It also would have been cool if that happened in the "Danny Phantom" Show). All in all, this was a wonderful story Dp-Marvel94. Thanks for such an enjoyable Story. I hope to read more of your stories someday. Until then, I will enjoy what I have going on with your stories here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Danny had developed Dan’s deep voice now huh? That’s neat and so sinister. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lion King reference in this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope the mother is not sam |
![]() ![]() Guys in white:(hurts Dani) filthy ghost! Daddy phantom:(Yujiro Hanma aura activate) (inhale) DEATH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have ADHD and the thick ass paragraphs are hard for me to read but I WILL PULL THROUGH |
![]() ![]() ![]() You forgot to mark your story as complete. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lion king reference yessssssss I love it XD XD XD |
![]() ![]() Like most women, Paulina is unhinged. Good job capturing her attitude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lion King reference, that was definitely a Lion King reference, plssssss tell me I’m right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really can’t remember what or why the hell did I loved this story but I did. God i need help and a better tease in my reading |
![]() ![]() LMAO THE REVIEWS— I'm sorry but the reviews They're hilarious and very interesting. Not to mention that you can learn a lot from them. You already have a good knowledge of writing and it has been a few years since this was written. If you have not improved (which I doubt) I suggest you focus on the criticisms they gave. Much love |
![]() ![]() Me: So how's Danny gonna find a permanent place for Danielle to stay? It's probably going to be difficult since he lacks resources. Storymaster1000: Actually it's going to be super easy, barely an inconvenience. Me: Oh really? Storymaster1000: Yeah, he'll just make a ghost lair that lets him do whatever he wants. |