|Reviews for Daughter of a Phantom|
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 24 . 11/27/2013
Yeah, Valerie's still alive. I love loop holes. They are so fun because you get to mess with people's head and be like 'HA!' I found a way around your plan. It makes you feel so smart. Great chapter.
| storygirl99210 chapter 24 . 11/27/2013
AWESOMENESS PERFECTION! (Sighs with relief) Thank god, Valerie isn't dead!
| zoxy2 chapter 23 . 11/25/2013
very good chapter, but for the next one please find a way for him to save dani and tucker and jazz without having to kill valerie because i dont see that going over well at all. and i like that you keep etting us one step closer to finding out who the mom is without actually ever telling us. very good chapter.
| PotterWhoLocked4Life chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
Pretty awesome chapter!
Also let me just say... DOOO WEEEE OOOOOOOO! DAY OF THE DOCTOR!
| Dani phan chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
I love your work! its truly amazing! i can't wait for more!
| jim89 chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
That was interesting, but it is also a little cliché to have Tucker and jazz captured just as they find out something
that essentially end the whole problem. As for your the next trial is to have Danny kill Valerie
that would be deal breaker. As a matter if they foil Froot Loops and save Danielle this Valerie deceased
it's will be a hollow victory. I am also assuming that Valerie and Danielle on good terms.
So Danielle will take. Valerie's passing hard, the only way around this is somehow faking Valerie's death
he said he has to kill her. He doesn't say she has to stay dead.
I'll leave it to the rest of you to figure out the details
Personally I like Valerie's character. I'm hoping you don't kill her off. But you can mess her up or
give her psychological trauma as a growth opportunity.
As for the rescue Danielle from guys in white by daddy. I really don't know who came up with that.
But you're right, it has been reused a lot. So I believe you came up with that scenario.
Either way, the next act is going to be impressive
| Tamara chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
Please update soon
| Fuchsia Phantom chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
Epic chapter! Can't wait for the next update! D/D FATHER DAUGHTER FOREVER!
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
Killing Valerie...harsh. I know I don't really like her that much so I guess it is okay to kill her. The only thing I will feel bad about is Valerie's dad being left all alone. And grrrr...I still don't know who Danielle's mom is. Great chapter though.
| Inviso-Al chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
PLEASE that Valerie doesn't die!
| GhostWriter2468 chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
This was a really good chapter. I hope Danny doesn't kill Valerie, she's awesome! Good luck on your finals and update soon! Oh, and happy 50th Doctor Who Anniversary too!
| Guest chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
Really good story .
| Blak-Ice chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
I agree with the way that everyone uses the GIW to do the father daughter stories. It's really played out and far too easy to do one shots with that. At least with your story, you expanded upon it, something most people don't do. I have the same problem with the crossover stories because everyone just uses the Ultimate Enemy route to have Danny doing other things and joining other Teams. It gets boring. But of course when you try to do it a different way (like I have) nobody gives a crap and don't want to read it. Oh well. What are you gonna do, right? Lol.
Anyway, short chapter, but not bad. This just makes me wonder though if Danny will actually be able to kill Valarie or if he's gonna find a loophole in this. Also, I feel bad for Amorpho as I'm guessing it was his Ectoplasm that was being cleaned up.
| Nicole The Dragon Rider chapter 23 . 11/23/2013
WHAT THE HELL! Is Danny really going to kill Valerie? I hope not. I like Valerie. Great chapter as always
| storygirl99210 chapter 23 . 11/23/2013
AWESOME CHAPTER! I really hope Danny doesn't kill Valerie! She's too cool!