|Reviews for Daughter of a Phantom|
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 13 . 2/11
Okay wow. The GIW and Vlad are up to no good, and now Maddie knows Danielle has human blood.. Yikes!
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 12 . 2/11
Well, damn.. We all knew Vlad was a crazed fruitloop, but this.. The guy has really lost it this time
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 11 . 2/11
Lol! Well, all things considered. I think Danny did a wonderful job! Awww, he seems so mature and responsabile. What a cute dork!
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 10 . 2/10
Omfg! I seriously had to stop, facelpalm, and snicker several times throughout several parts of this chappie. How embarrassing! Like omg! If I were Danny, I don't think I would ever be able to show my face again! Poor Danny, whatever way it may be - angst, humor, etc, phans always torture the poor guy xD
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 8 . 2/10
Oh boy! That ending!
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 6 . 2/10
Aww, this sweet. And still trying to get used to the idea of them being father/daughter. Like Jazz said, it will take some time to get used too :)
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 5 . 2/10
Well, at least Valerie wasn't too bad in this chappie..
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 3 . 2/10
Well it was interesting to see their reactions.
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 2 . 2/10
It's still a little weird for me to see them reffering as daughter and father, but mostly cause I'm used to them being cousins. It's nice. Danny will be an amazing father
| ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 1 . 2/10
Damn! I know Danny is the good guy and hero, and yes, well all love him, but damn. I think I got shivers! Sure as hell wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of that anger! o.o
This was awesome and unexpected! Now this truly has me intriuged! :D
| ILuffsNicoDiAngelo chapter 16 . 1/19
why do i get the feelings it samatha, paulina or valerie it would be worse if it was his mum
| Lord Jace chapter 27 . 1/18
I got distracted from reading this fic a while back, and eventually enough new chapters piled up that I just decided to wait until this was finished before reading it. It's what I'm doing now actually. And I just want to pause for a moment and thank you for an AWESOME chapter right here(the Optimus vs Megatron actually was a very good background for this too, so thanks) before I carry on reading. I have to say, I thought for most of the chapter we were going to see Danny's wail bring down the shield, or perhaps him use his half human ace in the hole, but neither showed up at all. Oh well, either way your writing was simply grand this chapter.
| jeragon chapter 2 . 1/15
thats from tarzan
| flaming wings chapter 34 . 1/13
i like the original, but if you feel the need to revise it why not post the revision as a separate story that way both options are available
| Daniel6 chapter 34 . 1/13
I'd say just fix the typos and condense it.