Reviews for Hidden in the Dark
One Lonely Marauder chapter 16 . 2/9/2013
*twitch, twitch* why, why must all the amazing stories I find not be finished?! Please don't hesitate too much before updating again. I mean, I know you can't rush genius, but still, this story is so amazing, and I love the tension - and even the gruesomeness of the wraiths. This whole story has kind of gotten my creative blood pumping again, and suddenly I feel like writing... thank you! and I shall await another amazing chapter from you.
Lucyole chapter 16 . 2/9/2013
love it your story is amazing, interesting, exciting, dramatic
and romantic every thing is perfect yay for seiya i like him
more than mamoru he is much cooler and funnier and understands
usagi better than mamoru does, please write the next chapter
as fast as you can and upload it.
*gives you lots of cookies of inspiration*
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 16 . 2/9/2013
Pluto! Oh yay! And Seiya was soo funny XD Usa's right he is a perv! Haruka is sooooo efing awesome! I just wanna hug her...*daydreaming over Haru hugs* she'd probably be like 'Wtf?! Who's this short girl!? She's sooo clingy! Michiru help! Another one!' or something like that.
So Im guessing Mamoru's absence from the story can only mean one thing...
A) He's locked himself in the closet as I predicted
B) He joined the circus (or went to Vegas to be a magician, I mean he's got the tux, top hat, even magic. And ChibiUsa can be the little bunny that comes outta his hat. He-l if my super hero girlfriend left me for a gender bending super hero I'd do that too)
C) something bad happened to him but I really like B so Im keeping it at that. Magician Kamen... yeah...
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 15 . 2/6/2013
...you know what just happened? I thought oh my god this is so romantic and their so happy! but then *sobs* mamo-chaaaannnn! you should've done that in the next chapter cuz I had forgotten all about him and his pedo ways! (that pedo part was just a joke dont take it serious even though in a way he is a HUGE pedo I knew it! Have you seen the way he and ChibiUsa have love affairs? JK I hope nobody takes that one serious...) I bet Rei Setsuna Beryl Nephrina Fisheye Fiore Natsumi Whatserface (the one who liked him in that SuperS episode but found out Usagi was Sailor Moon and she was like 'Oh fu-ck there goes my chance') Black/Dark/Wicked Lady ChibiUsa Galaxia (read the manga then you'll get it) Ami Makoto Minako (Im sure in that one S episode when Usagi got drunk all of them were flirting with him) Michelle (cuz she's super hor-ny over him in the friggin dub) and whoeverthehell likes him are all like "Now's my chance! Hey rebound Mamoru if I put odangos in my hair and prounce around in mini skirts while stuffing my face full will you love me?!" and then he'll just lock himself in a closet while eating bucket loads of ice cream (strawberry to be specific) and watching some weird daytime television drama on NBC while listening to Taylor Swift and Adele while burning pictures of Seiya. Right? You know it's true. Anyway enough with my imagination and on with the real topic. I love this chapter! Short sweet yet angsty I like it. Keep up the wonderful work and let me know if Mamoru is taking the closet thing in mind, okay? :)
No but seriously I have a friend who did that (XD), and apparently it works wont it work for Mamoru? -Okay now Im being serious for reals this time- Wonderful chapter, and very descriptive keep up the fantastic writing and now Im officially done with my rambling.
-Arty
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 14 . 2/4/2013
who is he who is he who is he?! Harukaaaa! Oh i love her she's so in character I love it! Hmm I wonder what'll happen with Mamoru... and all that. Poor Usa too but isnt she making Seiya feel terrible? Oh all this heartache builds the tension in the story it's so good. I love how your keeping us waiting on who this 'he' is instead of just telling us then and there that's like really original even Takeuchi doesn't do that. Good stuff really goooooood. Keep up the fantastic work!
-Arty
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 13 . 2/3/2013
Aw I love the Haru/Michi love! It reminds of the anime except no kinky comments but those are funny if you ask me. Like in the SuperS movie...
Im loving the Seiya/Usagi thing going on it made forget all about Mamo's cheating but I feel terrible for poor little Miya... she was so innocent...
Ohmyfuckit's Sailor Saturn! I hate how StarS only shows like 5 episodes and kills her off in the last parts I mean sure she comes back but we never got our kickas* Saturn action. So *clap clap* yay for Saturn she's like the pluto (planet not Senshi) of SM. And I'd love to be Ami or Minako I mean you have the right to say "My boyfriend is a transvestite a$$ kicking pop star who comes from the planet Kinmoku what about yours?" I mean really I've always wanted to say that. Now putting aside my rant, I really liked this one I seriously thought Kamen's rose was gonna appear and Starfighter would get into her pissed off protective mode and what not. I did but the Saturn came and I thought 'what was I thinking?! this is good!'
Great chapter!
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 12 . 2/2/2013
wahhhhhhhh?! okay to be honest i kinda laughed in the beginning but then i found out who it was and I was like WTF?! My head is spinning...spinning spinning...anyway...like I dont know now it's akward...what will happen I wonder...*sniff* I now he's a cheater blah blah ect but I cant help but feel bad for him... and I feel tons bad for Usa... will she find out? Hmm...
And *laughs* where'd you hear that silly rumor. I'll give you the REAL story. Okay on June 6th in Japan they announced a brand new SM anime coming in either Oct. or summer of 2013. It'll be based off the manga mostly and we dont know much. If you want facts go to or (moonkitty is sailor moon...everything ai-no-senshi is just manga and new anime info) you silly star. We dont know anything about the starlights so dont be so bitter!
mandm1984 chapter 12 . 2/2/2013
awww poor miya good story so far hope to see more
Crispywheat chapter 12 . 2/1/2013
Wow
usagi-chibiusa chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
I just finished reading all of it xD was awesome cannot wait for more, its a great story :3
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
*Sobs* Pooorrr Mamo-chaaannnn! I know this is a Seiya/Usagi fic but in this Mamoru isnt a Rei loving, cold hearted bas*ard! The first fic I read that isnt a Mamoru/Usagi fic that he has an undying and passionate love for her. And pooorrr Sei-chaaannnn! *Sob sob sob* I cant decided who I like more...but the Yaten getting punched in the face was really funny. Hmm...I think I either read this too fast or it's a bit sped up but whateves I just wanna know what happens! *Bites finger nails in wonder* This is intense and it's only the start! But...I know I sound like a bi-ch when I say this but...I wouldve given up on ChibiUsa...she's mean and annoying...no offense to moms, ChibiUsa fans blah blah ect., but yeah...she seriously got on my nerves in the anime...I wouldve been like 'Well...ChibiUsa with Mamoru or a probably better kid with Seiya? Both guys are to die for gorgeous...and both guys love me...and I love both guys...well in Seiya's case whatever the he-l he or she is. Hmm...*shrugs* I'll just go with Haruka.' Problem solved. Just kidding but still...I do understand Usagi loves ChibiUsa to death and if I were in her place I wouldve too damn...everything is complicated...Im sorry I turned this into a huge rant, didnt i? Sorry...*sob sob* im still sad...poor poor Mamo-chan...poor poor Sei-chan...
-Arty
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 9 . 1/30/2013
XD I love how Naomi hugged Taiki and he was like wtf am I supposed to do? Nice one.
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
Oh my! Now with Mamoru's gentleness and his dedication to his Usako (I love that name) and Seiya's undying not so onesided love for her I cant decided who I love more now! Im so happy Mamoru isnt so uncaring and abit cold to Usagi like he is in the anime you gave him his loving and caring manga traits in this chapter unlike other fanfics I've read where they make him an a$$ hole. It gives more tension and confusion for the story and Usagi's feelings and she really does have a reason to be torn in between the two. And Rei and Haruka were great! Rei isnt annoying! Im only saying that cuz I cant stand her anime side. I know they do have their anime personalities but Rei is really good. She's like a mix of manga and anime. And Minako is sooo cool and a great friend! Great job! :)
Arty
Artemis the Moon Maiden chapter 7 . 1/23/2013
Oh my god! Luna would say of my Serenity...anyways Mamoru's in this too?! Yay! Drama! I love drama and romance! This is reminding me alot of the manga yay! *clap* I like the manga out of every version of BSSM so Im very very happy 0w0
Pluto is so fu*king cool! I wonder how bad-a*s Haruka will be...Im excited to see ps have you been to Into the Light of Darkness it's a cool Hotaru/Saturn sight the title reminded me of it so yeah
Great work keep up the fantastic job!
Arty
kbtjmandy chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
Awesome story, enjoying storyline so far. :)
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