|Reviews for His Majesty|
| Maddy chapter 12 . 2/9/2014
I love this fanfic plz update unless that waz the end but it only ended with finn saying "hey guys" so plzz do more :)
| guest chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
pls make a sequel about it
| HelloPhilippines13 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
your story is amazing and i wish it should longer but i would be looking forward to is sequel
| Trasgo Madaraz Artifex chapter 12 . 2/3/2013
there will be epilogue of this epilogue? D:
| Valenis chapter 10 . 2/3/2013
Great Story so far! I must say this is a very intriguing concept, having Finn caught between two worlds. I also really like how you implemented some foreshadowing into the story; I don't usually see that sort of literary tool used in fanfic. I'm looking forward to future entries in this story to see how it plays out for Finn.
| Trasgo Madaraz Artifex chapter 10 . 2/2/2013
Let's hope that basillisks are the normal ones, they're not so touhg.
| 00cLosetFreak00 chapter 10 . 2/2/2013
pretty cool chapter. Not too many things happened but it did set up for an epic fight next chapter.
| 00cLosetFreak00 chapter 9 . 1/31/2013
Ok, thanks for the update. I think you are doing a good job at portraying finn but i think you mafe them friends too fast. I mean, it was good but as soon as she felt comforted by him, they became too good a friends you know. Them becoming friends kike that felt normal to me but now she seems too trusting of the stranger that she was shooting arrows at not even a few paragraphs ago. It was a good chapter, and i hope you continue. I have seen too many a great story cut short so please continue.
| kameron.wiegman chapter 8 . 1/31/2013
this is a very good story keep up the good work i wish they like made this into a movie cuz i mean theres nothing bad in it but nevermind that keep making these story ive read tons of fafics and sofar this is my favorite great job really
| 00cLosetFreak00 chapter 8 . 1/29/2013
This story is turning out pretty epic. "he who cheats death have earned life" best line ever. Seriously, this is turning out awesome. Please continue.
| Glenn Leider chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
An interesting adventure so far. Never seen so many "humans" in an Adventure Time story, though I'm not 100% convinced they really are humans. You seem to think that PB and FP are jealous of each other like in "All the Little People." Though as you promised, a minor side point. Interested in seeing what develops from here.
| 00cLosetFreak00 chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
I dont know what to say, just really looking forward to how this story is going to play out.
| 00cLosetFreak00 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Please continue, i like it and all except for flame princess name. Sounds like a dudes name. Aside from that, love the story.