Reviews for The Gladiator Tournament
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
You guys are all wankers towards this guy,bet u none of them were stolen and even if they were hes got 144 slots to fill, i believe he is an amzing writer and very creative sad to see u guys have stopped him from writing this story. :(
Guest chapter 17 . 10/4/2013
When I saw this story I thought it would be bad because there are so many charecters how could you make them all developed ? But this story is so much better than I expected keep up the good work ! I can't wait for the games !
jakeboy4914roxxx chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
wow this is a genius story, would you mind if I borrowed some of it?
hungergamesrpg chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
It has come to our attention that many of the characters in your story have been taken from . Please delete your story or credit our site's writers or further action will be taken. Thank you.
war horse paint chapter 16 . 8/21/2013
Yeah, a lot of the names of these "gladiators" were taken from The Hunger Games RPG. Not cool. Not cool at all.
situationalirony chapter 8 . 8/21/2013
wow, I really like these names.
so creative.
I wish I were that creative.
Kiar Fero chapter 8 . 8/21/2013
Excuse me, but I noticed you have the name Deimos Lasner in your fanfiction - first introduced in Chapter eight. I was wondering how you had come up with the name as I have a character on a roleplay site named Deimos Lasner, and as far as I have found he is the only one with that specific name. If this is perhaps a coincidence and you came up with the name by yourself then I apologize for accusing you but if you have stolen the name from me I ask kindly if you could either remove it or offer credit to me. If you require proof that I have ownership of the name feel free to contact me and I will provide you with such evidence.

Thank you,
Kiar
Sapphire2013 chapter 15 . 8/12/2013
Okay, so far, this is an amazing story and I cant wait to hear the rest. I like how well you described in detail, and how exciting it was, even though it is the start of the story. Great work
peetalover240 chapter 14 . 6/30/2013
Oh, Izaak. Not the best place to kill yourself, it wont make any veiwers happy. Now that ive met all the tributes i dont want to think of anyone of them dying :(
Call Me Fin chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
Twins going in is an interesting twist, though I wish I knew more about their story. Again a few grammar mistakes and more detail might be nice. Though I understand if your waiting till the actually tournament before you give a lot of detail since there are so many characters.

-Memeber of Pen to Paper
Call Me Fin chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
Nothing new here, grammar mistakes that need to be fixed, and more detail on the gladiators.

-Member of Pen to Paper
Call Me Fin chapter 4 . 6/27/2013
A bit better on grammar, but still plenty of mistakes to be fixed. Another thing I'm noticing a lack of is detail about the gladiators, most of them all I know is their name. I want to know their age, personality, and what they look like? Maybe adding more detail like that would help.

-Member of Pen to Paper
Call Me Fin chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
Grammar, Grammar, Grammar! You need to keep that in mind! Your story has so much potential, as I've said before, but your not editing it well enough. The mistakes takes away from the writing and distracts me enough to the point were I can't concentrate on the story.
Please work harder on editing.

-Member of Pen to Paper
Call Me Fin chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
Well, this chapter was a bit confusing. Again good potential, but the grammar isn't very well done. I suggest taking a few more looks at your work before publishing, or maybe a beta?
Anyways some more detail on the characters might also be a good idea, because with all the tributes it's going to be hard to follow everyone!

-Member of Pen to Paper
Call Me Fin chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Wow, this sorry holds a lot of potential. The idea of a whole new type of games is intriguing, and 12 tributes from each district all working together? It sure will be interesting. You deffienatly have got my attention with this chapter though I would suggest more edidting before posting. Though if your reading my story you know I hate edidting.
Anyways great first chapter and I look forward to reading the rest. Good work.

-Member of Pen to Paper.
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