|Reviews for Broken - A Lucas North Fanfic|
| crazygirlg chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
I read your story and I loved it. I'm currently reading your Hobbit story now. I love the plot twists in this one. It kept me reading more, although I must say, it was rather confusing trying to keep up. Plenty of action. That's good. I would only say that there were some redundancies that could be taken out. I love the ending better than the actual ending from the show. I wish most of Richard Armitage's characters didn't always die a horrible death after the audience learns to love them.
| uno mega chapter 42 . 2/8/2014
Do you work for MI5/MI6? Because seriously! Your mastery of action-writing is amazing!
I'm glad that they all got their happy ending! I'm more than happy to pretend season 9 didn't happen.
| wotumba1 chapter 42 . 1/10/2014
finally, finally they're together
your alternate world - love it!
could you please continue writing in this world? would love to know how life goes on for them...
| wotumba1 chapter 41 . 1/10/2014
i knew it!
will lucas find them? i sure hope so! they both deserve some kind of happiness!
| wotumba1 chapter 40 . 1/10/2014
so now he knows... is there anything he can do about it?
| wotumba1 chapter 39 . 1/10/2014
who is it? valentin?
| wotumba1 chapter 38 . 1/10/2014
valentin's the father?
what? they can't get a break, can they?
| wotumba1 chapter 36 . 1/9/2014
guess that's the right choice, even if it will hurt them a lot
| wotumba1 chapter 31 . 1/9/2014
so many layers to this story, awesome!
| wotumba1 chapter 30 . 1/9/2014
the chess master... who might that be?
| wotumba1 chapter 29 . 1/9/2014
we would all wish for a happy ending for lucas, right?
| wotumba1 chapter 28 . 1/9/2014
yeah, what is she doing?
| wotumba1 chapter 24 . 1/9/2014
that can't be the end of it!
| wotumba1 chapter 23 . 1/9/2014
| wotumba1 chapter 21 . 1/9/2014
what kind of father/grandfather is that?