What a wonderful writing! I enjoy reading every single word of it…

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None of this making sense now they don’t have magic? When?

Okay what happened to the gun he took from Bella’s guards this fic is losing consistency fast

He literally saved the girl yet get treated like this but Even after the ambush and forced investigation he still will be willing to work with them.

Fuck Harry is so annoyingly naive or just willfully stupid at some points like of course the secret group would ambush you after selling out the rebel group camp.

Neville is annoying weak did he forget their original plan was ruined because of him.

Hello! I enjoyed your story very much!))
I was wondering, if you've ever posted the outtakes you talked about anywhere? Because there are quite a few loose ends left of which I'm curious about... and the epilogue is so far removed from the main plot's timeline.
And it's been REALLY a while, since you posted anything here~ I would have honestly enjoyed reading your second story - you do have a way with words to capture interest throughout the whole very long story (and you're good despite English not being your first language; neither it's mine, btw, but I do notice mistakes, and you had almost none, definitely nothing in sentence structure I often see with other foreign writers).

Whether it was Weasley twins who tampered with the Ministry bomb to make it weaker? Were they captured after last Victory Day (jumping all over the place & yelling about what they did with rockets kinda begs for it)?

How was Ginny after Hary's manipulation?

Was Bill a traitor for the regime? How did he react to the letter Voldie sent him?
Was Fleur involved? Is ito why she married Bill? To spy?

Who copied Snape's notes & sent them to the traitors?

Was it Ron, who fed Harry veritaserum? Why Ron was with Snape & the Girls at the Ministry then?

How Snape disabled the wards? It would be funny to read his shinny commentary ;P

How Crouch ended up with French & Rebels?

What Bella thought off the torture sex room? Did Voldie knew of that room? Did anyone among the DE?

What happened with Remus?
Was Tonks involved in anything illegal again?

How French Minister was killed? Did it trigger the attempt to seize British Government?

How was Draco during the Victory Day disaster? Has he finally showed he was not a kid anymore?

Has Narcissa broken Lucius' hand again lol?

Where did the kids come from? How Marvolo even agreed?
Is Meredith a squib (the story with her accidental magic feels kinda fishy)?

I would also liked to read Voldie's thoughts when he poisoned Harry and it backfired aka Harry almost died?

Well, thank you for the wonderful time I had with your story! :*

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Would you be willing to create a playlist of your favorite Voldie x Harry story's or any of your favorite Harry x male stories, you make all the stories you've read sound so good

This story is great I've never been able to do slow burn stories before but you have me completely hooked. I'm glad you haven't made Voldie abusive and only mildly interested with harry but starts getting even more interested, I can't wait to see if Voldie finds out that Snape was keeping information away from him.

I'm glad to see this article in 2022，I'm Chinese. I read these by mobile ! The author's article has been recommended author's article is well written.(Sorry, my English is not very good. Maybe I can't express it clearly)

Brilliant! Wonderful interpretation of the canon, and fantastic characterizations. Thanks for sharing this story.

okay, I hve to intervene a bit because of one thing I couldn't understand in this chapter. Harry is a reader in this ffic and even a competant researcher, it doesn't make sense that it won't show in his writing skills. As a teacher, I'm a firm believer in literacy and I've seen the positive effects reading books has had on my students, no matter their age or level. Heck, even Moony would catch on and correct this. Is the mispelling and grammar a deliberate move to get people to underestimate him, even the likes of Neville? Or is this a headcannon? It's just something that I find the most inconsistent with Harry's character in this story so far :S
Btw, really like the story so far

Too many twists and turns around chapter 50 and after. It seems like ppl was enjoying your story that you thought “I can make it better”. But the thing is it was already a good story and you ruined it smh. It’s like cooking. As soon as someone states “I like this dish you made”...people always think “oh if you like this then I’ll add this to it so you’ll really like it” Basically instead of “putting yo foot into it” you put athletes foot in it and ruined a story that was already damn near perfect smh. Why change what’s already working for you? Anyways I couldn’t follow the fight scenes bcuz the writing was just thrown together unlike the other chapters and all the twists smh. It’s unrealistic smh.