This was an amazing story i wish i would have started reading your stuff earlier i got here cus a lot of people write stuff about you in author notes and the likes. And damn if it's not all true (most of the things people say about you are things like "the lemon king/master" and that your text just makes you feel the emotions so clearly, and that your an amazing writer).

that was awesome

This is what you called for, Fiora!

What? Garen didn't yell Demacia during the whole thing? Unfollowed

Loljk

Really amazing and it's nice to see some plot also included while not distracting from the main attraction. Also pretty fucking hot.

Well, not much i can say. I am pretty amazed. You did a pretty good job. But did not get the just of the last sentence. "Blood for Noxus"? Could you explain to me briefly what that meant? Other than that, a pretty amazing piece of art. :)

Damnit people, stop making Fiora lemons before I get done with mine!

I hate you for Garen / Fiora...

But I forgive you, for your earlier lemons.

((Oh, my Fiora fic will make my Akali fic look like it was made by a preschooler!))

Great lemon I liked the end

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Well, fuckin' A, dude. This is the capstone to your other works, no doubt about it. Garen is a man with a thousand-yard fuse, but it seems to be attached to a megaton bomb at the end. Makes me feel a little sorry for Fiora.

...almost.

Top-shelf stuff, good sir.

If this is like hate sex for Garen and it's mostly about power, dominance, humiliating Fiora, wouldn't he have done anal? To me that seems like a logical step if he's trying to dominate and inflict pain.

I am honored by this effort and pleased by the result.

I'm really not going to say much, although I'm jsut going to assume that my own fic was written after this point.

Nice job on the detail of the lemon itself, though the room lacked description.

The sound effects kind of broke the immersion a little bit-to me, they seemed silly at times.

But overall, this is great and probably your best detail-wise, even if your second Sona lemon is my favorite overall.

The ending was a little rushed too, but much better than my own Fiora lemon.

Nice job making me feel like my lemons suck, dammit. Good work.