what a beautiful canon fiction T_T this fic is absolutely amazing. thankyou for your hardwork to make this masterpiece. i'll wait for your another sasuhina works in the future

her confession to naruto about her feelings for sasuke is amazing. she looks so calm yet so confident. i love this scene

love this chapter so bad... that's SO romantic!

Bellísima! Me ha encantado

wow this moment between sasu and hina was heart touching

sad

ohh great story ever. amazing, fantastic everyone read before you die. well written story. thanksfor sharing

why fight now, it was nor needed here

A hot spring is the best

Sometimes it is too light hearted for me, other times casually violent. And then The man. The girl. And I'm like Who is it? Oh it is Sasuke

Omg I was scared für Hinata as i myself experienced creepy sailors while on a ship in some Southern Islands.
But not understanding what they're saying does help.
Will Hinata need Sasukes help again?

I think you're misusing the term "dig get face into her palms". And using it too often. Just by this one phrase I can tell you might not be a native speaker but wow your writing is amazing
I would prefer if you wouldn't refer to the two main characters as The man and the Hyuuga, etc.

Nice one

Tavern food didn't seem to be best

Hinata is attracted to him but hates him and wants to cry.
I would cry too if I had to lie down on a bug infested filthy mattress

Always trust a cold cave to bring two people very close together