Reviews for Jealousy
Amer Leon chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
So it was Naruto! This was way to short...but to the point.
Amer Leon chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Who is the one watching...it just seems sooooo wrong to read that Naruto is not with Hinata. I will read on to see where you go with this.
picturr chapter 5 . 10/31/2013
Overall i believe you need a history lesson on what the green monster is, aka jealousy, this more like hurt... your girl see's a chick walk to you and kiss ya and the chick then talks about this and that then you get all mad at your guy and leave with another man... a guy called 'mike'.. really? leaving you on a misunderstanding.. she iis off lord knows what with this guy..

that isn't jealousy, that's hurt and betrayal.. hinata was the one jealous...
Veraozao chapter 5 . 10/22/2013
love it
ReindeersAreBetterThanYou chapter 5 . 10/12/2013
COOL!
Raimoundo chapter 5 . 10/11/2013
Well i would say your story needs depth.
xXYour DoomXx chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
Pretty good. I wasn't expecting the Shion thing though. I was expecting a Sakura kind of thing so that was nice. Idk about you but I really hope that Shion never makes another appearance in Naruto and that ending was just for funniness. Grammatical errors, but overall good.
Firework's Feelings chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
It was good but you had incorrect words and word usage. Other then that it was fine. Good work
Firework's Feelings chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
I'm loving the longer chapter
Firework's Feelings chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
Wow.
Firework's Feelings chapter 2 . 10/6/2013
Poor Naruto...
Firework's Feelings chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Good chapter
valeri chapter 4 . 9/8/2013
when are you going to continue this story
picturr chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
ok i'm BEYOND confused...
valerie chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
this ia an amazing chaptre you have to make more
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