Reviews for A New Life
Elivira chapter 31 . 4/19
Great story! BTW you can have sex while you're pregnet tho.
afgold1011 chapter 1 . 2/8
This was SOOO sweet. I cried so much and was absolutely devistated when Kanda dies, I literally cried my eyes out. Although I was a bit disappointed with the ending, because I really hoped then would get back together in some weird supernatural way, I loved it. This was just amazing and I think you should continue writing because this was fantastic. 3
WafflesRose chapter 40 . 2/2
This was an awesome fic. Thanks :3
Tsubaki-Naoto chapter 40 . 1/15
I don't really like long fanfiction but i think you did very well you kept the reader interested till the end
TheChaoticNeko2014 chapter 40 . 1/7
THIS...THIS WAS SO Heartwrenchingly Beautiful 3 Thank you so much for Writing this Fanfic 3 I enjoyed it so much 3 I've favoritied this...It was so beautiful this fic 3
xXxPhantomxXx chapter 40 . 11/30/2013
. ! You made me cry so much! My mom thought I was weird, but I love this sooooo much!
Black Devil White Demon chapter 40 . 11/17/2013
Good epilogue, good epilogue.
fairygirl90 chapter 40 . 11/15/2013
Was kind of shocked at how you made Kanda die that was horrible, even though you did make it so he returned. the only thing is I can only imagine what everyone who doesn't know the circumstances would react to her being with Kanda again, since he is supposedly her son etc. Still a good read.
gracewright chapter 40 . 10/25/2013
. . . by far one of the weirdest fanfics I have ever read, . . but it is also one of the better ones :3 Thanks for the epic story!
ToktelasAndTea chapter 31 . 10/8/2013
This is a pleasant story and I know it's only a fanfic but I think if you plan on writing more in the future about pregnancies and children you should do a bit more research. First, a woman is not going to be up and about, taking a shower, assembling cribs, and demanding sex. At best she's probably going to be recovering in the hospital bed for the next 24 hours. Also, a new born will not just latch on to the nipple. As with everything else, they must be taught which means the nipple should be guided into their mouth and sometimes even squeezed in order for them to realized it is a source of milk. Last, after feeding a baby they should not be put down until burped, otherwise your going to have a very unhappy child on your hands.
I appreciate your accuracy about the pregnancy, what with the three weeks before the start of morning sickness and the bleeding of the uterus. I think you should know though, a pregnancy is not going to show up in a test the day after the sperm enters the egg. The body needs time to build up hormone and it is these hormones that show up in the urine and we read by the pregnancy test.
That's about all I have to say. The inaccuracies don't really retract from your story, you have a nice plot going, I just thought you should know for future reference. Otherwise keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 40 . 9/27/2013
This was so sweet and the ending was so sad, but sweet at the same time. You're an excellent writer.
tygereyeofthedead chapter 37 . 9/26/2013
I normally don't like gender bends but in this it's kinda sweet. I don't think I can favorite it though. Keep up the good work
Aerea-Sparda-Azeneth chapter 40 . 9/1/2013
*Cry like a baby* Oh god this ... this ... this DX perfect oh god TwT I love it!
TearsDrippingDown chapter 40 . 8/31/2013
Lavi-Usagi chapter 40 . 8/30/2013
Oh my god. Wow.
Don't mind me over here. Just wiping my eyes.
I loved it :D
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