Reviews for The Mirror of Erised
The Prince's Phoenix chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
Bravo! I love the idea of the little epilogue. The whole Lily/Severus thing still breaks my heart.
Her Royal Goddess chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
I'm in a flood of tears, I demand...Nay beg that you do a follow up.
Maybe one from Severus point of view carrying on from where she left...please please let him have at least one more night.

Much love from me Xx
Amaya2278 chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
That was hot... as hell... yum...
Ptite Mac chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
Oh! It's the end, already?!
I like it but I hope you'll make a sequel ;-)

Thank you for this amazing story :-)
Moonchild1212 chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
Wow.. I really hope you do decide to write a sequil to this one. It could be really interesting to see how it changes things. Thanks again for writing it - it was a LOT of fun to read
guest chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Wow! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
server13server13 chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
Lunajen323 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Crap... You stopped.
LydiaLovegood chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Oh my God. Hotness, like an inferno. wow. ;)
Her Royal Goddess chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
*Does a little dance, makes a little love and gets down tonight*

I'm greedy for more Xx
AutumnsSun chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Oh my god- you take a break from Snapes Story and this is what you write?! Gosh damn woman. Soooo hot. Who would think innocent Snape could be such a turn on?!
I am so glad you decided to keep adding chapters. Can't wait for the 4th.
Ptite Mac chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Oh ! I never thought that I will find an innocent Severus this... arousing... so thank you...
I read the whole thing a second time with our conversation in mind and... I tell you it makes the story entirely too interesting ;-)

Severus is cute in this chapter (ch. 3) he's so eager to learn how to please her...

Thanks and update soon please ;-)
Moonchild1212 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Wow! Another stunning chapter! I love the way you write. I've wondered if maybe he never had any experiences... and what it would be like. It's hard to imagine that he would with Hermionie... but this certainly is a lovely little interlude! I've read lots of fics that assume he visited prostitutes or had experiences raping as a Death Eater, but I wonder if maybe he never had been with a woman. I can certainly see him as you've portrayed - almost shy and unsure. It's really interesting. I almost wish this were more than a four shot. You should think of expanding this later perhapse... maybe they meet years later? Or.. after the war? Hmm.
The Prince's Phoenix chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Oh my poor, poor, sweet Severus. He has seen so much in his life yet he is so innocent. Reading Severus as a virgin is so different but I like it.
onecelestialbeing chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
omfg this was so hotttttttt damn! I need more! I'm screaming with laughter and horny as hell now, an interesting combo
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