|Reviews for Open Fire|
| beckey.ledbetter1 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
I love this story plz keep writing
| irishnlove2shop chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Wow that was a long time for them to get their crap together. Great story.
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Sad one. They were torn apart by lack of communication after a horrible tragedy. And his tragedy only grew when his parents were lost and he was left with nobody. All that wastend time Again, sad one.
| cullensrule chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I am glad she stopped being a bitch and realized that she was settling with Garrett. I had a hard time with this Bella but she redeemed herself in the end. I am glad that something good happened to Edward and she didn't suck him dry.
| mariga79 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
OMG! such a wonderful story, had tears
| eddiesgirl4973 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Girl ! You writing us amazing / loved this story!
| Cina's chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Loved it. Thanks for sharing. And congrats on the win.
| BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
That was such a bittersweet story. Poor Edward pining away for ten years. And Bella running away when the going got rough. Such a shame. She really didn't love Garrett that was clear from the beginning. Edward was such a solid man, I'm happy they both got their happy ever after, all.
| imustbecrazy chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
not many stories this short can make me cry. it's hard to get invested in the characters so soon. this one definitely brought out the tears!
| mauigirl60 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
What a beautiful story, very poignant and moving. I could feel their anguish, you did a great job of allowing their emotions to leap at you from the page. You are very talented. Great job and I can see why your story was chosen as the winner. xox
| LaTiDo chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
| BB Masen-Cullen chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Oh My God you made me cry! I loved it though! Wasn't what I was expecting but I loved it was much better than what I came up with when I read the summary! Lol is there any chance you'll be doing a Futuretake or something? Would Loove to read it! I didn't want it to end! :D
| cusic1981 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
| Teresa R chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I loved the happy ending all those lost years so sad. Great story Thanks
| Re Lane Cullen chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Dear Lord, \I'm crying hhehhhehe This story kinda remembers of that movie Sweet Home Alabama, wicch I love! :) But your version is so much better :D I loved it. Congrats!