Reviews for The Pits Part 2
PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Ash has had an extremely difficult life. He's extremely independent for him to financially support himself at such a young age. That takes true awesomeness.
SpencerDorman chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
I love both this and the prequel. I love everything about it. Ash being mute, for sure. It makes the story so much more different, but in a good way. I hope you make a part 3 soon, and actually have Ash and Misty kiss already!
Red the Pokemon Master chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
Write it where Pikachu uses Thunderbolt.
Ally chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
I'm glad you ended up writing another part to this story! :)
Refraction of Light chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Dude this is a really good story. Still the only hole in this is he didn't mention pikachu
Markus' pokemon chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Shocker: Raichu chuchu raichu churai rai (this is still kinda sad to me...)
Lt. Bolt: man manec ectric manectric (i feel bad for Ash... and for Misty...)
Inferno: blazi blaziken ken blaze (will you guys just lighten up?) *even though he still feels sad inside*
Mew (no nickname cause i couldnt think of one):mewmewmew meeew mew. (dont forget, they still might eventually be together, depending on how he writes it)
*basically they are saying that this is very emotional, but they still have hope*
Yankee718 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
This story is awesome. When will part 3 be out?
Basic Trainer chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I was expecting Ash to be the undercover detective. Please write the next part soon, I really want to know what happens.
Ammyst chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
This was such a different Idea, I enjoyed it a bunch.
iwishiwasasnorlax chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
this isn't what I was expecting at all for a sequel, but I liked it. Hope to see a part 3 sometime.
thefierydeath chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
:,( so sad.
freddycoops chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Hmm this was just as good as the first
And for a moment there I actually contemplated the thought of ash being the agent
I didn't see any errors either
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
No, Ash has to stay with Misty. He should have in the show too.
I don't want to be part of ff chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Part 3 please!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
I hated the ending. Why couldn't of Ash been the agent?