|Reviews for Hollow|
| Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 10/1
I'd actually like to see more of this storyline continue. Even though it wasn't his intention, he was starving himself and then periodically binging and purging like an anorexic individual-won't he have to face some of the same mental and emotional consequences of it, alongside his physical recovery? And how will the others react, especially the more impovershed members of the company who might well know what it is not just to miss a few meals but to truly hunger...? And how will Gandalf react? Surely the elves would have noticed and informed him, or at least tried to speak to Bilbo about it? As a reknowned healer, wouldn't Elrond recognize the signs of starvation-or necause of his ignorance of hobbit biology, would he be as fooled as the dwarves? And the Shirelings, would they be so forgiving of the company when Bilbo returns home, when food is so important to their existence?
| Liliana Dragonshard chapter 1 . 8/1
Hm. . . .why not add one more chapter to this dealing with the rest of the companies reactions? Did Gandalf ever know what was going on, or at least, what could've happened? Please for some more o' that? Keep it up and Happy Story Weaving!
| guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 5/22
| PhoenixAsh6953 chapter 1 . 4/28
Ah, this was cute! I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort stories, especially romantic ones. I imagine writing Thorin is hard: how do you balance his outer curmudgeon with his inner deep passion? But you captured it well.
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 4/27
Thorin's love sort of came out of nowhere, although I do like the way you described it.
| poposee chapter 1 . 3/10
I loved the descriptiveness of this piece. It was a flowing read and love the little fluff at the end. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
Bleh, had to stop at the "may I kiss you", seriously, way to take advantage of a disoriented/confused/starving hobbit!
| Firebirdever chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
God love this one so much, the pain and the hunger are so well describe, I was in tears at the end. Wow, incredible!
| sammie chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
So freaking adorable ugh
| J'aime ma vie chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Poor Bilbo. The way his body was eating away at itself really hurt to read... but it was well written; and the Bagginshield fluff at the end was very sweet. :)
| Soy YO-SARIEL chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
| reddoggie chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Wow.. this was amazing! You know, you never think about, yea, hobbits eat a lot, but Bilbo survived. I liked your story, I just felt for Bilbo so much, I felt so connected to Bilbo when reading this. So glad at the end Thorin cares for Bilbo.:3 Keep up the awesome writing! Thanks!QQ
| PurpleFairy11 chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
this is really good I think if you have not already done it do a companion piece to this story maybe one with the reactions of the rest of the company along with Gandalf and Beorn
| Flaming Rose chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
This was so freaking cute! Why didn't you write more? I would have loved for this to be a mulit-chapter fic!
Anyway, I think now that I've read this, I've became obssessed with ANOTHER type of fanfiction. So, I'm going to go and freak out now.
Have a great weekend, thank you so much for the story, may your muse forever be with you, and peace! Bue!
| Pyrane chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Sad and sweet :D