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I’m loving the association that Harry has made between a port key and the graveyard. Just another little detail that Rowling could’ve used to show that his adventures still affect him.

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Oh my word! Damn this story is incredible! I almost like it more the the original, do you think your going to make a sequel? You totally should. Keep on writing!

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So, I know that he says "like a sister" but I want MORE!

"Oh, Harry"

Bambi! That's so clever!

I love your stories so much! Can you make more?

I think k Ginny is the spy

I think the whole story is brilliant. Especially because the writing is a lot better than most fanfiction I read. Nicely done!

you are really good at writing stories.
keep it up!
ten points to whichever house you belong to!

This is a really good take on a re-do of fifth year. I loved some of the ideas you thought of and they were somehow eerily similar to things that happened or could’ve easily been written. The promise ring, defense classes, and sally were such great additions to this story. I really wish this was continued.

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