Reviews for Grey and Red
MichaellaD chapter 10 . 10/24/2014
The only one I think that really embodied what you were trying to accomplish is the second one (white). I thought it was well done.
vanrigsby chapter 10 . 6/18/2013
This was good. I enjoyed seeing all the different colours and it was nice to see the different scenarios that you managed to weave into one beautiful story!

xxx Grace.
Mossi.b chapter 10 . 1/25/2013
I have really enjoyed this series of little tales that help to rebuild Jane's world from an arid desert of just grey back to full technicolour. I have really enjoyed the journey. It was a great retelling of scenes from the series that I have watched hundreds of times, but you have managed to put a new dimension on them.

Well done, looking forward to your next Jane story.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
soooo sweet :)
Mossi.b chapter 9 . 1/24/2013
I can imagine him noticing this after watching Dr. Steiner die...Jane is such a vital man and to witness the life essence ebbing away would have affected him greatly I always thought.

I love to see him basking in the sun, it is almost as if he was saving it up for later.
Mossi.b chapter 8 . 1/23/2013
He is coming alive again...colours all around!

This continues to be such a strong story, Almost a journey we are taking with Jane
Mossi.b chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
You have done it again, you have taken a scene that I have watched...many...times and put it in a new context. Usually with that scene I think of Lisbon, lost in the song and her memories...now I will think of Jane dancing with Angela at the Lion Tamer's wedding ( Now THAT I would have liked to see...I wonder what his wife did!)
Guest chapter 4 . 1/19/2013
Next color please.
Mossi.b chapter 6 . 1/21/2013
It is lovely dipping into Jane's thought processes this way, and I love how his world is beginning to take on colours. Lisbon is so full of hope that she can change Jane, and he is just accepting of this, but he will only change at his own pace.
Mossi.b chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
At the time of this airing, it hadn't really sunk in how many memories this simple act...picking up a baby... would affect Jane, but of course it would wouldn't it?

I love how you are creating the layers that are Jane, eventually he will arrive at the person that we met at the start of the show!
Mossi.b chapter 4 . 1/19/2013
This is one of my favourite scenes...Jane, beach and children...perfect.

Loved this, looking forward to the next.
Mossi.b chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
I can't believe that I didn't guess green for Lisbon's eyes...it is obvious really.

Another great chapter, looking forward to the next one
Sue Shay chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Excellent!
Mossi.b chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
A clever way to add colour, using Sophie, and shows the slow progression away from a grey world.

Looking forward to the next one
ngocquevt chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
It's a nice start. Jane seems to like grey, he often wears this colour.
I'd like to have a look at the world through Jane's eyes and his way to cope with it. So far (on TV) he's strong enough and I hope his world won't be too dark here :)
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