Reviews for The Transcendent Ashikabi
Reaper74Kill chapter 4 . 7/2
Pls pls pls pls update this story. Its the best crosover of the sirt out there pls update
lee chapter 4 . 6/18
so far love all your bleach stories all of them are well written and conise please keep up the good work hope to see updates to the bleach crossovers (all three) soon
hardoraku chapter 4 . 5/9
Will this be continue? I'm being hopeful that it will be :D
JJN37 chapter 4 . 5/7
So when will you update? Cause I'm enjoying this story
michal.zaprt chapter 4 . 4/22
Well where is that promised chapter? So mean to start so well and then leave it
cegi85 chapter 4 . 4/13
Come on man update this story.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/1
It pretty good that story that you made keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/26
Short chapters are perfectly reasonable :) This means you write the best in the time your have to feed us glorious feels! And glad to know you have a plan for the harem rather than collecting everyone, because you have Minato for that if need to get rid of unbound Sekirei!

Still don't think Miya would be one to share, (when can just pawn other Sekirei to whoever kisses them first), but your writing to far (Ichigo & Miya are adorable!) has been pretty great :D
Guest chapter 3 . 2/26
Miya OC? Na, I think you handled the romance with her very well - they are so swwet together! Though immediately following it up with Natsu wanting to jump him which totally broke all the romance feels...

Who is OC is Ichigo, declaring to a random power-hungry maniac that he's a "true living breathing God". Subtle threats or short & to the point threats would have been better for him... and what's with making him write every popular book ever? lol
Guest chapter 2 . 2/26
Wow, devaluing Miya's feelings towards her dead husband. Now that's just low of you!
There's no reason to write the plot as "everyone but Ichigo sucks" - it hardly make for interesting characters... but I do hope Minaka gets to meet a nice n painful death soon! lol
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26
Can't say I'm a fan of the "literally everyone stares at him and he's such as misunderstood special snowflake that no one knew of his genius, and he looks down on everyone with 'merely' above avg intelligence (ie the doctors)"... Or those annoying constant references to his "good looks" pfff 'greeks statue' indeed, what is this, Twilight?

I know it being a Sekirei crossover romance is most likely going to end up in mysterious pheromone matching, enslaving-kisses and constant singing about good looks, but can you write some personalities other than "so cool/pretty"? Don't think Miya is one who would stand being part of a harem, being a "goddess/pillar" and all, so I hope this won't degenerate into him picking everyone off the streets or tolerating lewd behavior...

Do like this story intro more than the other ones in the xover genre so hope it doesn't go crazy overboard with the character traits established for Ichigo so far.
the nameless one chapter 4 . 2/18
send hichigo after me cause I havnt said anything until now but u need to hurry up and update
JensenDaniels32 chapter 2 . 2/8
JensenDaniels32 chapter 1 . 2/8
ivan0061509 chapter 4 . 2/5
This was a good chapter but when is he going to tell them about his past and also fight so I can't wait for the next chapter
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