|Reviews for The Transcendent Ashikabi|
| midnightfox343 chapter 4 . 3/27
good story but you need to xplain tgeh bond a little more in depth. As a fellow Michigo shipper I know for a fact that they would have been handsy AT LEAST after sh got winged by him!
| Infinite.Zero9 chapter 3 . 2/18
I like it
| Infinite.Zero9 chapter 2 . 2/18
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/12
Will this be continued?
| Zero H Gundam chapter 4 . 2/3
Nice story hope you update it.
| Raskator chapter 4 . 1/26
I cant wait for the next chapter! :)
| GentlestCobra2 chapter 4 . 1/5
Great make more chapters
| InfernoKing chapter 4 . 12/19/2016
I live the story and hope you update this wonderful story again. Can't find many good Sekirei stories like this! :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/16/2016
Please continue this story and I do not think Minato should be in the sekirei plan because ichigo has thrown the power bases of MBI and the major ashikabi out of wack so I do not think Minato would be an important character just another person for Ichigo to protect Ichigo also can easilt take over Minato's role in the Sekirei plan.
| OriksGaming chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
The first few paragraphs pretty much ruined any chance that I would enjoy the story. It made two things evident right away.
One: You seem to have an affinity for run-on sentences. And no, that's not a good thing.
Two: Your entire fiction isn't going to involve any romance whatsoever- it will be porn without plot, and bad porn at that. You seem to like writing flowery descriptions of everything, but your descriptions regularly end up spawning numerous run-on sentences and utterly demolishing any bit of immersion that the reader has managed to obtain.
I know that much because you made Ichigo into some walking sex god. You even wrote that he looked like a normal, average person aside from his rather effeminate hair. So I can easily deduce that you're going to go on and on about some mystical sexy aura that Ichigo has or that he has a confident bearing and that it makes girls want to jump him. Both of those are incredibly contrived and incredibly stupid ideas.
By turning Ichigo into a magnet for the opposite sex, you dissolve his humanity, and subsequently any possibility of human relationships. Your harem will be at best a horde of 'perfect' subservient women, and at worst a mass of generic, Mary Sue-ish sex slaves. There will be no plot and no romance; on top of that, your lemons will all be clinical, factually incorrect, and extremely unrealistic.
I don't even care if I got any or all of this wrong; if your first few paragraphs give me an impression like this, then there's something majorly wrong with them.
| Dzerx chapter 4 . 11/11/2016
Awesome! Really hoping you continue this fiction soon.
| hevenlydemonknight chapter 4 . 8/19/2016
So sad this is dead
| Ghost132 chapter 4 . 7/30/2016
I just need karasuba in his harem and I will die happy
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/8/2016
This is simply too good not to update. I hope you return
| lostanddistracted chapter 4 . 6/1/2016
Please update this story. How can you possibly leave it with such a cliff-hanger like that?