Reviews for Fifty Shades: Unfinished Love
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 29 . 9/4/2017
What a great chapter. Elliot is still Elliot. Mia getting Ana up for the auction. Thank you for putting Flynn in there it would not have been the same. Plus having Christian say that there are things he loves about Ana YES. THANK YOU
Dolor3sDeeHowe chapter 28 . 9/4/2017
I cannot figure out if Christian is afraid of telling Ana what he feels or if he is just there because of what happened. Ana I think loves him but with everything that happened if she thinks this will end. Thank you. I love Mia and have always loved Grace. Thank you for your great story.
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 27 . 9/3/2017
I wish that Ana never had to go through this terrible ordeal. I know Christain is out of his element while this is going on. Mia was an unexpected pleasure it was exactly what Ana needed. I really believe that Christain was not going to say any thing about the ball or his birthday. I am glad they got a little closer. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 27 . 9/3/2017
I wish norbing
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 26 . 9/3/2017
What a sad sad sad chapter. I cried through it. I hurt for Ana that they hurt her so bad. I hurt for Christain for him blaming himself. I hope they find who leaked the pictures from the party. I hope they find no really hoped the catch the clowns who hurt Ana. I am glad Ray is there hopefully he will help her. I pray this is not the end of my favorite couple. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 25 . 9/3/2017
This is getting harder and harder for me to finish you story. I don't want it to end. I want to see where they are going and what will happen next. Poor Ana. Being bombarded with the press. Poor Sawyer he will have his handfuls with Ana. Poor Christain blame g himself for this. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 24 . 9/2/2017
This was another good chapter. Ray telling Ana no one will ever be good enough for her in his eyes. Which every dad tells his daughter. But to think Christain could ever takes his place. Wow Ana is right Ray will always be her dad but Christian will have another place. If they stay together. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 23 . 9/2/2017
This was a good chapter. Ray coming and surprising Ana because of her first day at work. Catching Christain in pajama pants. Christain feeling lost while Ana is having a daddy daughter day. Christain getting excited about photos of him and Ana. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 22 . 9/2/2017
Every time I read about Christain's past it kilss me inside. That someone could do that to a child sickens me. Ana needs to tell him her past to. These two are two souls that are meant to be with each other. Love this story. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 22 . 9/1/2017
Wow Christain telling Ana about when he was a child. The horror and the pain he felt. Ana feeling so angry for what those scum bags did to him. How he said he thinks he falling for her and how she realized she is falling for him. Tears and tissues for this chapter. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 21 . 9/1/2017
Such a touching and scarey chapter. They start talking about Ana Christain is worried about her safety from husband #3. She falls asleep and he drifts off only to be awaken but Ana touching him while she sleeps. The two of them need to bring their past up front for the two of them to go forward. Thank you.
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 20 . 8/31/2017
What a great chapter. So much fun
Ana meeting Mia and Elliott. The way Christain relaxed and Ana seeing another part of him. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 19 . 8/30/2017
Love how Ana took control. How she likes Mia. How they both want this to work. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 18 . 8/30/2017
I like that they talked when he was in LA but I wish they would have a conversation about their feelings and what scared them both. But Christain being shy and not knowing what to say I don't see him that way. I know they are both scared but communication is the key. Hope it happens. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 16 . 8/29/2017
Christain Christain Christain. What are we going to do with you. Ana had every right to be upset. You listening to Elena and your dark side are screwing up the best thing you will ever have or had. I am feeling a lump coming to my throat. I am so upset. Thank you
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