Reviews for Fifty Shades: Unfinished Love
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 16 . 8/29/2017
Christain Christain Christain. What are we going to do with you. Ana had every right to be upset. You listening to Elena and your dark side are screwing up the best thing you will ever have or had. I am feeling a lump coming to my throat. I am so upset. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 15 . 8/29/2017
What a good chapter how Ana feels about her mom not coming to her graduation.. How happy she was that both Ray and Christain both there. How Christain is in tune with her and knows something isn't right. Jose acting like Jose. Kate stepping up to the plate for Ana and telling Christain to watch his step. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 14 . 8/28/2017
I had trouble with this chapter. Not Christain and Ana but I wish Christain would talk to Ana what he wants. But what happened to Ana when she was young and in school. I didn't have it as bad as Ana but I was bullied in school too. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 13 . 8/28/2017
I am really enjoying this story. The way you explain things in detail is amazing. You have me rooting for them all over again. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 12 . 8/27/2017
What a great chapter. Loved how you explained the flowers. I got all choked up with the letter. I hope Christain does not want Ana for a submissive. That he want her for her with some kink too. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 11 . 8/27/2017
Christain needs to tell Ana what is going on with him and Ana has to do the same to Christain. I wounder if Ana's problem has anything to do with husband #3 of Carla. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 10 . 8/27/2017
This just wants me to cry. Ana is so distraught and Kate though I understand her had no right. But I am glad she did call and tell Christain what for. Now Christain getting upset because she won't reply to his call. He as much as told her to go. Doesn't he think she feels cheap for being with him and then it was over. But I am glad he felt the same way May be even worst because he does not know what he is feeling for Ana but is scared. Thank goodness he has not talked to Elena but we all know that will not last. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 9 . 8/27/2017
I thought this was a good chapter. Showing how they had feelings neither of them understood
Christain thinking he was not worthy of anyone feeling anything for him. Ana just wanting to know him. Elena in his head. Thank you.
Dolores DeeHiwe chapter 8 . 8/27/2017
You write so well. As happy they were last night and this morning now it is falling apart. I understand Ana wanting to know him. But Christain has Elena in his head and he is being told don't let anyone in. You are not capable of love or being . Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 7 . 8/27/2017
What a beautiful chapter. How you made Christain a little less demanding and Ana a little afraid what happen. I do believe he loved her from the very start but did not understand what the feelings were he was having. Elena did that to him. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 6 . 8/26/2017
I really am enjoying this story
Christain doesn't understand his feelings for Ana but neither does Ana for Christain. Elena really screwed with his mind
Telling him he was unlovable. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 4 . 8/26/2017
I am really enjoying this. Loved how they had sex well almost and both feeling something they couldn't put their finger on. Wonder how Christain will feel when he finds out she is still a is looking for a sub and I don't think Ana has a submissive bone in her bodu
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Wondering if Christain will try to make Ana his submissive or will he walk away from her. Thank you
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 2 . 8/26/2017
Really enjoying this story. Thank you.
DoloresDeeHowe chapter 1 . 8/25/2017
I like how you have Ana a little stronger than she usually is. Kate is Kate. I wonder where Elliott went I thought him and Christain came there together. Thank you
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