Reviews for Rokushiki no Naruto
BrotherDeath chapter 10 . 3/9
One of the best OnePiece/Naruto Crossovers i've ever read. And Finally a dark Naruto... I can only hope you'll continue. So far great Job!
xxxrae97xxx chapter 10 . 2/19
Man I wish this had continued...
Majin-kun chapter 10 . 12/13/2014
*sigh* You honestly should've just kept it at NaruShizuka...and just kept everyone else as JUST teammates...I'm mostly reviewing because this is a pretty fun story...not enough to distract me from the horrendous SasuHina but everyone has their preferences...and admittedly the LOOK good. Both fair skin and dark haired...it's like a lot of Shoujo manga where the male protagonist is Japanese.
Oh well, good luck with your fic. But you should know that there are a lot of NaruHina readers out there that would review if you had Hinata not be paired up with anyone else rather than not read your story at all when they see the pairing in the tags.
I just started reading this because I wanted to see how she would get over her previous crush(at that point that is all it was)...and it was pretty hilarious how it just vanished after being perved on by Sasuke. I mean...really? Naru and Hina just see each other as siblings of all things after having a moments that would have probably created the base for their relationship in canon?(As in, Hinata getting the balls[not very eloquent] to confront Naru like a normal girl and Naruto finally able to see a girl that genuinely cares for him)
Anyway, as a solely unbiased reviewer...the way you are pairing up Hinata and Sasuke seems really shallow to me. There's no spark in my opinion...kinda like a fairy tale pairing...one's a prince and the other a princess so they MUST be together. That's the kind of vibe you gave me.
And I'm pretty sure that procreating with two doujutsu based bloodlines would have some drastic effects on the infant. Most likely blindness or even death by a disease from the dominant genes combating each other. Not saying it's a hundred percent...just theorizing that when things can go wrong...they WILL go wrong. Murphey's Law and shit. Sayonara :3
Majin-kun chapter 7 . 12/13/2014
His adopted little sister? Pfft...when did that happen? That just came out of nowhere...
Well...as a NaruHina fan...guess all I have left is to drop this right now...

Betcha Hinata will go all fangirl for Sasuke now that he acted like a Knight in Shining Armor...the day after he peeked on her...ah, the joys of being handsome.
dracon867 chapter 10 . 11/25/2014
Is this story abandoned?
Mojtaba13 chapter 2 . 11/8/2014
CP9 left for their mission years earlier. Before Luffy even went on his trip.
doubledamn chapter 10 . 10/30/2014
I like the addition of Haki, I honestly always thought that Killing Intent was some primal, bastardized version of Spiritual Will in the first place.
Crimsom-Wyvern chapter 8 . 10/15/2014
I was wondering. Since Naruto can use the Seimei Kikan wouldn't he be able to learn how to control his sensasion of pain. The idea is to stretch one's mind over all the body, from the smallest hair to the toenails. Wouldn't that allow him to numb his body's sensation of pain and prevent the seal from working ?
zolydck chapter 10 . 10/6/2014
So far it's really turned out well.

You have really shown naruto as a diverse and constantly changing person with views that contradict old ones. For example he is willing to abandon his comrades because getting justice is more important to him then his comrads, however he hates sarutobi for making a similiar choice by putting peace before them.

He still has a long way to go and hopefully Sasuke and Hinata can snap him out of the self-destructive path he is taking. Their are ways to correct the faults of the village but if he truly cares about his friends they should do it together (either from outside the village by forming a new entity or reforming the village from within).

Anyways I hope to read more.
zolydck chapter 8 . 10/6/2014
I like the way that played out. Everyone's reactions made sense and naruto demonstrated the proper tempermant of a 12 year old kid who just faced world shattering resolutions.

After all why would he want jiraiya to train him after abandoning him for most of his life. Hiruzen's "leash" will just make him dislike him even more.

I am interested in seeing where you plan to take this since he doesn't have anyway to really exercise his justice. Not to mention he wouldn't really be able to get justice for what happened to uzumaki's home land anyways (since most people responsible are now dead).
zolydck chapter 7 . 10/6/2014
hmm I am not sure I like naruto being a supporter of dark justice. It seems to go directly against his previous ideals.

For example he said he would forgive konoha for their wrong treatment of him but dark justice is unforgiving and merciless. It looks not at what the future could be but on the past and as such it would believe that individuals like gaara should die regardless of whether they could change.

Basically its rather un naruto-ish in the sense that someone who believes in it can't change people to the "good side" since in naruto's view they are already lost and must pay for their old actions.

Besides that minor grievance this was a great chapter.
zolydck chapter 3 . 10/6/2014
Great story so far, I have really enjoyed it.

A thousand Rob Lucci's *shudders* that would be equal to a yonko class threat.
Guest chapter 10 . 9/4/2014
si sigue la publicaciĆ³n
HolySheet chapter 10 . 7/11/2014
Please dont go hiatus. ;; Compared to others like Lee. How strong is Sasuke nd Hinata? ;;
fukuro chapter 10 . 6/29/2014
narutos skill with soru is really coming along but his tekkai needs work chapapa keep up the training naruto and feel free to use my jugon to smash your enemies to pieces chapapa!
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