|Reviews for Rokushiki no Naruto|
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 10 . 7/11
Although I don't really like some of the things that happened in the previous chapters, I absolutely loved this one. This is very interesting that I hope you update soon. I hope you have Naruto let go of the hatred that he feels for Hiruzen and remember the good things he did for him when Oro killed the him. Also I love the relationship you have given my favorite character (Kakashi) and Naruto. In fact the relationship that the entire team has is great.
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 8 . 7/11
I am not really happy with the events in this chapter. I love the way you portray Hiruzen in this story but I am starting to dislike the direction that Naruto is going in. I can understand him being angry at his godfather and father but I didn't expect such a strong reaction to Hiruzen. The man basically raised yet after some admittedly shocking revelations he is willing to kill him?
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 7 . 7/11
When I was reading the massacre, I was honestly thinking "Why the hell is the author doing this, I hope this isn't going to be a Rob L in Naruto story". But the confrontation with Hinata and the fact that Naruto can feel negative emotions cleared some of my doubt in the decision.
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 6 . 7/11
Haha great, good ending to chapter. Did you get the fishing part from Dragon Ball, it seemed familiar.
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 5 . 7/11
Probably the best chapter so far! You really created a scene that helped the team bond and once again thank you for giving Naruto such a realistic level of strength.
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 4 . 7/11
Good chapter, I was a little worried about how you would with the Sakura/Naruto scene but it turned out really well.
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 3 . 7/11
Good fight, I especially liked Naruto's attitude and his realistic strength.
| Agent Frank Underwood chapter 2 . 7/11
Awesome start, I have to praise the detail in this chapter.
| Pagemaster96 chapter 10 . 7/10
I can't help but wonder if destroying the scroll was really necessary.
That aside, I love the story and hope the next update is soon!
| Pagemaster96 chapter 1 . 7/9
A great beginning to this story, I can only hope the chapters continue to be as good as the first
| BlackDragon Uchiha chapter 10 . 4/29
Great story. I really like how you have naruto slowly training and getting stronger with time instead of just saying "yup. Let's just make him as strong as rob lucci within two years of training" I like your plot and ideas. It makes the story interesting. :) plz update soon.
| BrotherDeath chapter 10 . 3/9
One of the best OnePiece/Naruto Crossovers i've ever read. And Finally a dark Naruto... I can only hope you'll continue. So far great Job!
| xxxrae97xxx chapter 10 . 2/19
Man I wish this had continued...
| Majin-kun chapter 10 . 12/13/2014
*sigh* You honestly should've just kept it at NaruShizuka...and just kept everyone else as JUST teammates...I'm mostly reviewing because this is a pretty fun story...not enough to distract me from the horrendous SasuHina but everyone has their preferences...and admittedly the LOOK good. Both fair skin and dark haired...it's like a lot of Shoujo manga where the male protagonist is Japanese.
Oh well, good luck with your fic. But you should know that there are a lot of NaruHina readers out there that would review if you had Hinata not be paired up with anyone else rather than not read your story at all when they see the pairing in the tags.
I just started reading this because I wanted to see how she would get over her previous crush(at that point that is all it was)...and it was pretty hilarious how it just vanished after being perved on by Sasuke. I mean...really? Naru and Hina just see each other as siblings of all things after having a moments that would have probably created the base for their relationship in canon?(As in, Hinata getting the balls[not very eloquent] to confront Naru like a normal girl and Naruto finally able to see a girl that genuinely cares for him)
Anyway, as a solely unbiased reviewer...the way you are pairing up Hinata and Sasuke seems really shallow to me. There's no spark in my opinion...kinda like a fairy tale pairing...one's a prince and the other a princess so they MUST be together. That's the kind of vibe you gave me.
And I'm pretty sure that procreating with two doujutsu based bloodlines would have some drastic effects on the infant. Most likely blindness or even death by a disease from the dominant genes combating each other. Not saying it's a hundred percent...just theorizing that when things can go wrong...they WILL go wrong. Murphey's Law and shit. Sayonara :3
| Majin-kun chapter 7 . 12/13/2014
His adopted little sister? Pfft...when did that happen? That just came out of nowhere...
Well...as a NaruHina fan...guess all I have left is to drop this right now...
Betcha Hinata will go all fangirl for Sasuke now that he acted like a Knight in Shining Armor...the day after he peeked on her...ah, the joys of being handsome.