|Reviews for Where Doesn't It Hurt!|
| Count Mallet chapter 76 . 10/27/2013
Babysitting is already the challenge with the language barrier. Somehow, Anakin forgetting his lightsaber is going to get him in trouble once again.
It appears that Lux & Ahsoka are starting to focus on a possible future. I can only hope the banter doesn't distract them from the current task at hand. One small detail: Ahsoka would probably put a hand to one of her lekku.
It also look slike we might have a double execution scheduled. Rescuing one prisoner is challenging enough. Two would definitely be more of a challenge given all the heavy security planned for the ceremony.
I also noticed a couple of foreshadowed moments making references to Han Solo and the future rebellion. That's always a nice touch.
- Count Mallet -
| Dr. Anthro-Tano chapter 76 . 10/27/2013
I really liked the story in the beginning...I really did...but it started losing my interest a while ago because it IS so long, and it doesn't have a lot of what I wanted from it and why I even started reading it: LuxSoka! Sorry, Trap.
| AhsokaTano141516 chapter 76 . 10/27/2013
Great chapter, V! :D You did an amazing job balancing the light and dark themes in this chapter, and I like how you gave us three different view points :-) Please update soon!
| Dread-Pirate-Not-Roberts chapter 76 . 10/26/2013
Still loving this. I had a Crappy day. Then I checked my email, saw this, and POOF
Day got better by sixty percent! Thanks! #)
| Jedipadawan123 chapter 76 . 10/26/2013
Amazing update soon plz
| Count Mallet chapter 75 . 10/23/2013
With Obi-Wan on the way to Onderon, I'm interested to see if he gets to tangle to Durge. I'm sure Durge would relish another showdown. And I"m sure Obi-Wan would love to take care of Durge once and for all.
Interesting to see Ahsoka's growing frustration during the conversation with Anakin and Obi-Wan. She's so skilled in some regards, yet she still has much to learn and needs more maturity & patience as well. I also like dhow you had her reflect back on past missions and comments made to her and by her. I'm also glad to see Lux & Steela rallying the troops. It looks like the action is about to pick up very soon as we make our way farther into the arc.
Update when you can.
- Count Mallet -
| Jedipadwan123 chapter 75 . 10/16/2013
Hope you update soon
| Dread-Pirate-Not-Roberts chapter 75 . 10/16/2013
Must I mention how talented you are again? C:
You are fantastic. Yeah, Saw. SAVE THE KING
VIVA LA REVOLUTION
(I've been watching Les Mis way too much...)
| AhsokaTano141516 chapter 75 . 10/16/2013
This was a great chapter, V! I love how it was similar to the episode, you did a great job on that :D And unfortunately, I don't have season five yet. Probably won't get it until next year :-/
| carciino chapter 74 . 10/16/2013
In a matter of a couple of days, I have read the 74 chapters you have written and WOW. It felt like something LUCASARTS would write! You, sir, are one of the most talented fucking writers I have ever seen. This should be turned into a comic book...
| Dread-Pirate-Not-Roberts chapter 4 . 10/13/2013
I may look crazy for this, but I have been reading this story all over again. Just felt like I needed to once more praise your writing. #3
| Count Mallet chapter 74 . 10/5/2013
I always like the comic relief that the mindless B1 battle droids provide. Still, you'd think they could navigate maze-like conditions easily. Sometimes, I guess they're only human.
The more I read about Barriss, the more I think about our past private messages. I'm definitely curious about how you plan to further develop this subplot. Despite our differing opinions about the grand finale, I will say I've liked this part so far.
Also a nice touch with Lando's comments foreshadowing the Original Trilogy.
Don't feel too bad, I've had trouble moving forward with some writing as well. I imagine being busier than expected this Fall has played a role in that, but it happens, so don't worry about it too much.
- Count Mallet -
| Lone star chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
The story will be way better if you don't write about Order 66
| Dread-Pirate-Not-Roberts chapter 74 . 10/2/2013
Cookies are... cookies...
But we'll get to that, because this is FREAKING AWESOME ALLOW ME TO PRAISE YOU
YEEEEEAH YOU ROCK, SIR... author... lady... whichever... :/
| AhsokaTano141516 chapter 74 . 10/2/2013
This was a great chapter, V :-) It was definitely worth the wait :D I'm really excited for the next update :-) Update as soon as you can! I know the next chapter will be just as great as this one :D