|Reviews for It Ain't Over|
| REgrrl chapter 1 . 2/6
| meelee729697 chapter 1 . 1/31
Blast the a/c, plz.
I love that kind of firey passion.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
I'm sorry but that was stupid. The writing was really good and the story probably would have been better if it wasn't a one shot. All I see is a loser Edward and a beyond stupid Bella. Lets just have sex and nothing ever happend. Please!
| Roxy'Twilight'Girl chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
i love it and i want more!
| mstre11 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I saw this rec'd on the The Lemonade Stand and I'm glad I checked it out..This was great,the connection and pull they had towards each other...I would so love a another chap of this to see what happened with them..Loved it!:)
| shehazi chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Thank you for sharing.. And lemon drops for recc'ing.
| mem4375 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
I think I need a shower. Steamy!
| hikingurl48 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
| Edmazing chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
First, first, first... I wanna ask for more of that please. Holy shit, woman, can you write a lemon. Whoa.
And second, gah I love determined and possessive Edward. I know, it's so wrong. lol But hot damn, him and his heat did me in. His knowledge, his confidence, his need- it was raw and so exciting.
haha So yeah, wow. Thank you for sharing.
| kinsano chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Wow! I could actually feel the magnetic pull these two have for each other-that there was no force or distance that could keep them apart. Very powerful. And a nice lemon, too! ;)
| soobliette chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Regardless that it's not your usual fare, you wrote a good piece of lemony angst :)
Thanks for writing and sharing xo
| Edward's Eternal chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
oh... what a way to end... please do a follow up chapter? So we can hear his story? And her reaction?
| pauleen chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Beautiful. I asume after he gives how story, she'll probably forgive him.
| sheifa.akra chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
PERFECT so sweet and yet so sad, love it.
| Babette12 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
But, they didn't resolve anything! We might know why he left, but she doesn't. Gotta say, I buy the swinging fist more than the sex. Then again, it is Edward, and who can resist?