Well done.

YowZa.
Blast the a/c, plz.

I love that kind of firey passion.

I'm sorry but that was stupid. The writing was really good and the story probably would have been better if it wasn't a one shot. All I see is a loser Edward and a beyond stupid Bella. Lets just have sex and nothing ever happend. Please!

i love it and i want more!

I saw this rec'd on the The Lemonade Stand and I'm glad I checked it out..This was great,the connection and pull they had towards each other...I would so love a another chap of this to see what happened with them..Loved it!:)

Thank you for sharing.. And lemon drops for recc'ing.

I think I need a shower. Steamy!

Thank you!

First, first, first... I wanna ask for more of that please. Holy shit, woman, can you write a lemon. Whoa.

And second, gah I love determined and possessive Edward. I know, it's so wrong. lol But hot damn, him and his heat did me in. His knowledge, his confidence, his need- it was raw and so exciting.

haha So yeah, wow. Thank you for sharing.
Mel

Wow! I could actually feel the magnetic pull these two have for each other-that there was no force or distance that could keep them apart. Very powerful. And a nice lemon, too! ;)

Regardless that it's not your usual fare, you wrote a good piece of lemony angst :)

Thanks for writing and sharing xo

oh... what a way to end... please do a follow up chapter? So we can hear his story? And her reaction?
Rather sad...

Beautiful. I asume after he gives how story, she'll probably forgive him.

PERFECT so sweet and yet so sad, love it.

But, they didn't resolve anything! We might know why he left, but she doesn't. Gotta say, I buy the swinging fist more than the sex. Then again, it is Edward, and who can resist?

xoxo!