Reviews for Meet Noble
Thenoob1234 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
First Name: Jonathan

Middle Initial: M

Last Name: Saunders

Age: 26

Hair: Dark hair with a military cropped haircut

Eyes: Faded blue (pre-augmentation), Piercing, dark blue (post-augmentation)

Skin: Tan but marred with scars, most prominently, a gash that runs down the side of his cheek, inflicted during a training incident.

Race: Caucasian

Height: 6 foot 8 inches (pre-augmentation) 7 foot 2 inches (post-augmentation) 7 foot 6 inches (with MJOLNIR armor)

Weight: 410 Pounds

Homeworld: Reach

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : Spartan III Candidate

Rank(if applicable): Lieutenant Commander

Specialization: Stealth and close-quarters combat

Fighting style/ weapons: Combat knives and explosives, favorites being the KA-BAR combat knife and the Energy Sword

History(with family): Raised in a wealthy family he lived a life of luxury, before the Covenant invaded and killed off his parents. Orphaned, he was abducted and conscripted into the SPARTAN-III program. He remains composed on the outside but suffers internally from the grief of his parent's death, blaming himself for not being able to save them. Likewise, when fighting the covenant, he has a bloodlust fueled by his rage, and enjoys torture as a way to vent his feelings.

Personality: Cold, calculating, with a cool demeanor, loyal but not submissive. Willing to do anything to achieve his objectives, including putting himself in the way to sacrifice for the team. Excels in all forms of attack, but prefers blades and close-quarter combat over long-range engagement, and is a master of several forms of martial arts, including taekwondo, karate, and capoeira. Intelligent and cunning, he works alone, tending to view other teammates as a liability. He keeps to himself and generally seems placid and emotionless. Remains quiet, only speaking when absolutely necessary. He has a thick American accent.

Noble Member: Jorge

Armor: Wears a customized variant of the MJOLNIR Mark V(B) with extra storage areas for knives and grenades. It also has a specialized cloaking system, copied from Covenant cloak devices. Unlike most other SPARTAN-III's, he is equipped with an AI named Omega, who is almost the polar opposite of Saunders; jumpy, happy, and talkative, Saunders hates the AI, but still tolerates it due to it's extensive knowledge banks.

Other: His favorite weapon is the KA-BAR combat knife, which he carries along with him at all times. He enjoys pain and suffering, a reflection of his former past. Diagnosed with sociopathic tendencies but refuses treatment. His Spartan Tag is B-376, with his codename being Shadow, due to his ruthless efficiency and stealth during missions. He has a rivalry with Noble Six, seeing him as an opponent that threatens his position and command.
Lady Razor chapter 10 . 10/26/2013
Wow, okay, wow. I have no words but just...wow; that was very amazing, you went above and beyond what I expected Earemir to be and I-WOW. You just made him all the more intense and serious and overall...intimidating. I don't know how many times I'll be saying this but, wow. I am at a loss for words.

That was very well written, thank you!

And take your time, we all go at different paces. Hope whatever's making you feel crappy will disappear soon but otherwise, just take your time :)

The Lady
Grazehunter chapter 8 . 9/14/2013
Wow, sorry I never saw this till now. But just...wow! That was a hilarious read! Thanks, for everything. And keep up the good work!
Keybearer001 chapter 2 . 9/5/2013
actually make my character between 120 -130 pounds and (i forgot to mention) have an athletic build (muscles and all)
Keybearer001 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Hey i have a request for a chapter.
A buddy of mine has been sick lately so to make him laugh i told him about this story and he wants a story about how he is ill and noble team specifically Kat is assigned to take care of him until he can undergo the spartan 3 operation. but the men of noble decide to have a week off and leave kat to do the work. he flirts with her for the most part and she gets annoyed with him, but the two start to bond after a while and become friends. At the end leave the relationship between them open for romance but make the story more about a growing friendship. i wouldn't mind a kiss at the end.
First Name: Joseph

Middle Initial: classified information

Last Name: classified information

Age: 19

Hair: brown

Eyes: green

Skin: white

Race: human

Height: 5 feet 7 in (pre spartan operation) 6 feet 10 in (after becoming a spartan)

Weight: 140

Homeworld: reach

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : spartan 3 candidate

Rank(if applicable): captain (since he's a pilot)

Specialization: pilot

Fighting style/ weapons: likes long range weapons like dmr and sniper

History(with family): unknown

Personality: likes to annoy Kat but is a good and honest person who eventually starts to treat her with respect and affection

Noble Member: kat (with the others making appearances who joke about hat being a nurse)

Other: rest of noble make appearances and have them get humiliated because they failed their duty (also try to get noble to fit personalities from the game as close as possible if able please no ooc moments for them if possible)
PotatoKnight chapter 9 . 9/4/2013
Great chapter, interesting even without action.
Master Elite chapter 9 . 9/2/2013
Chapter 4 is still my favorite. I just can't believe she died, hurt me inside you know. Lol. Anyways nice job. Looking forward to reading more.
browniej126 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
First Name:Joseph

Middle Initial: W

Last Name:Brown

Age:22

Hair: short, spiked brown hair

Eyes: blue

Skin: white

Race: Caucasian

Height: 6'9"

Weight: 122lbs

Homeworld:earth

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : Spartan III

Rank(if applicable): warrant officer grade 2

Specialization: scout

Fighting style/ weapons: mainly uses knifes and his favourite weapon is a shotgun

History(with family): his family was killed by insurrectionists he is the only member of the Brown family left

Personality: he loves making jokes and trys to make everything seem fun and never is down

Noble Member: Emile

Other: Joseph prefers to be called Joe
PotatoKnight chapter 8 . 8/28/2013
Well executed, 10 internetz points
PotatoKnight chapter 7 . 8/26/2013
ANOTHER!
TheAlphaSpartan chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
First name: Stuart
Middle initial: C
Last Name: Craig
Age: 25
Hair: Dark brown
Eyes: Green
Skin: Pale
Race: Britain
Height: 6"10 inches tall
Weight: 140 ibs
Home world: Earth
Occupation: Spartan III
Rank: Captain
Specialization: Spartan (Since Spartan IV is not on the occupation list i just put down Spartan you know what i mean)
Fighting style/ Weapons: Is fond with Knives,Shotguns,And mostly anything he can use.
History(With Family): His Mum and Dad are retired Spartans who were relieved of their duties because of the truce with the covenant. While his mum and dad were out playing with him (He was eight) A surprise attack from the covenant came forth. They told him to hide and he did in a gap on the floorboards caused by the rumble of the ship. However he did see his parents holding off the covenant but with no avail they died in his sight. It is a repressed memory that can be caused if in the same situation. Ever since the incident he's been in the orphanage but kicked out for critically injuring another child because of him bringing his repressed memory back. Reports say he gets violent when his memory comes back to him.
Personality: Socialpathic but friendly, Protective, Insane (In his traumatic state) Sometimes has a temper.
Noble member: Carter.
Other: None added.
TyroAkira chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
First Name: Felix

Middle Initial: E

Last Name: Rhode

Age: 17

Hair: Bronze

Eyes: Gold

Skin: Pale, kind of peachy

Race: white

Height: 4"9 (and one fourth of an inch!)

Weight: 104 lbs

Homeworld: Earth

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : Student

Rank(if applicable): N/A

Specialization: being sneaky and clever

Fighting style/ weapons: She likes to use blades and pistols, often steals energy swords from Elite corpses since they're shiny. Fights like a dancer and uses her nimbleness to dodge attacks.

History(with family): Mom worked as a Veterinarian while her Father was an ODST. Met when he brought in a dog somebody shot. Loving family with few problems but Felix's father is still fighting in the war. Really not that much different from most families.

Personality: Felix like her name is lucky, a clever and witty girl who thinks like a fox. She likes to make weird jokes or say really awkward things. Tends to bug the quiet people to say something and likes glomping people who do nice things for her. Very friendly towards older people and tries to protect people who are often more powerful than her despite their abilities. When in danger she becomes cold and calculating.

Noble Member: M!Noble Six

Other: Likes horses, donuts, and cats. Gets hyper whenever any of these things are in sight. Likes to address herself as "Deviant" and smirk while doing so in an attempt to be cool (coughcough-which she's not-cough). Very much a tomboy and really hates the color pink.
Hanyou Mage chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
I like how you write and if you want the chapters to work together make them all different missions that Noble team had to do with other people until the found a replacement for Thom. but its your story you can do what ever you want. I am Currently trying to write a group of on shot like stories that will be in the Story I will be posting up soon Called What If. so if you want i can put one of YOUR characters in mine as a trade if you want.

anyway here is my character and you don't have to use her if she doesn't fit the story you want to write. I will be using this Short BIO for my story too. well with some parts left off

First Name: Isabel-B312 (The playable character in Reach)
Middle Initial: she doesn’t really remember
Last Name: she doesn’t really remember but if I have to choose I will
Age: 29 (Same age as Emile-A239)
Hair: Black and longer than it should be
Eyes: Almond shaped and Blue in color
Skin: Tan but not as Dark as Emile
Race: American-Japanese
Height: 6'9”
Weight: 212lb
Home world: Classified
Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI): Noble Six
Rank(if applicable): Lieutenant
Specialization: Stealth and hand to hand combat
Fighting style/ weapons: Assault Rifle, DMR/Magnum,
History(with family): she doesn’t remember much of her family she just knows that her mother was always Kind and her Father was a Marine. They died on one of the planets the Convent Glassed. She was six when she lost her family. She does have a brother but she is not sure what happen to him. For all she knows he is still a civilian.
Personality: She is serious when she is on the battle field or when she is in font of OTHER UNSC members. Around the Spartans (Any Spartan) she acts like any normal person. Fun loving and caring towards the other Spartans. She sees them as Family. To her they are the only Family she has. So she is rather protective of them. She Also likes to play the who can get there first/kill more covies with Emile
Noble Member: Emile-\A239/Noble Four
Other: not really sure what I should put here but she does not get along well with Kat, but she will treat her like a sister. Jorge is her favorite Brother. Jun is the Annoying brother. Carter is the over protective brother in her eyes.
optimus prime girl chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Love the story and the chapters you've done so I'd like to apply. _

First Name: Denali

Middle Initial:E

Last Name: Starr

Age: 24

Hair:Brown, long, reached the middle of back

Eyes: Blue

Skin: White, slight tan (not much)

Race: White/Caucasian

Height:5' 11"

Weight: 140 lbs

Homeworld: Earth

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : UNSC enlist

Rank(if applicable): Lieutenant

Specialization: Sniper & Swordsmen

Fighting style/ weapons: Long range sniper & and close quarters energy swordsmen/combat knife
Weapons of Choice: Sniper Rifle, Pistol, Combat Knifes, and Energy Swords

History(with family): American child from Earth, she lived a pretty nice life as a child. Never dreamed that one day she would join the UNSC. When she joined the UNSC at age 19 she enlisted as a computer technician and had never touched a gun before. However due to the Covenant's relentless assault she was forced onto the battlefield. At first she would simply hide and pray that she would live, but as her platoon began to fall apart during one battle she found an unknown courage within her and rallied them together. She received a medal for her bravery and continued on up the ladder to her current rank as Lieutenant.

She has a great respect for any and all Spartans. She feel into the typical stereotype that the Spartans were machines until she was saved by one, Master Chief. After that, she greatly respects them and expects her platoon/battalion to do the same.

Personality: She is very outgoing and compassionate, but she knows when it is time to laugh and time to work. On the battlefield she is focused on the objective at hand and will stop at nothing to accomplish it. She is a fearless leader and a brilliant tactician, however she does value learning about other cultures and societies (she has a special interest in Elites).
However, off the battlefield she is a loyal friend. Once she accepts someone as a friend she will stand by them til the bitter end. She is also a good listener.

Noble Member: Carter

Other: She has a headset that contains her radio. Similar to an Xbox headset with the headphone setup with a microphone on one side. Also, an eyepiece that can be extended on the right side to increase her zoom on her weapons.
Here is a picture of her: art/The-Glow-in-the-Dark-369792294?ga_submit_new10 %253A1367745816
Pinkemena Diane Pie chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
LOL here ya are

First Name: Holly

Middle Initial: J.

Last Name: Maddison

Age: 27

Hair: blonde

Eyes: green

Skin: fair

Race: White

Height: 6 foot 11 inches

Weight: 231 lbs.

Homeworld: Unknown

Occupation(student/UNSC enlist/Spartan II or III/ODST/Insurrectionist/AI) : Spartan III

Rank(if applicable): Commander

Specialization: Infiltration, espionage, ambushes, firefights and other large-scale battles

Fighting style/ weapons: Martial Arts and bladed items. DMR, Assault Rifle, Magnum, Shotgun, Battle Rifle

History(with family): Had a loving family who met their end at the hands of a Zealot, which she tricked and killed following her sixth birthday.

Personality: Distant sometimes, generally compliant and kind, wryly cynical, angry on battlefield

Noble Member: 7

Other: None
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