Reviews for Over Time
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
You are gifted with good writing I love your story because its wonderful and it doesn't involve Cameron in it but you should write a lot more stories with the break up but Loren was pregnant and Eddie was mad because he wasn't ready and he loved his career and he wasn't ready to give it up so he left like Trent and divorced her and then a couple months later he comes crawling back to Loren but she moved on and Eddie was hurt but then he went to lorens job and asked for forgiveness and she forgave him but she didn't take him back
joan.goldman.9 chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
WOW I just read your first 3 chapters and they are powerful. Can't wait to hear Eddie's thoughts. GREAT story.
LILBARBIEFANTASTIC14 chapter 3 . 7/29/2013
love it keep going
preciousgem72 chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
You do sooo well with one-shot stories why don't you try a long term story?!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Amazing Update soon. Your stories are really good. Leddie is getting back together right?! Your an amazing writer
Love Kathy
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Love love love !
lele chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I want more!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
you should have loren stop at his door then turn around and knock again then when he opens the door she crashes her lips on to him.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
what what no no no no no no no no what the heck how you just end it there
HH-Forever-and-Always chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Please write a second chapter soon! Oh and I love your stories...
rrezo.iroy chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
that was really good...keep it going
marirosa1979 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Amazing writing, the end sadden me!
love-liz96 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This is really good. hope they get together. later in the story
Sheram2206 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
EdwardsWifey2010 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I love it keep it goin. Is that a poem in this story its really very good