Reviews for The Rival
dellute chapter 3 . 9/17/2014
Really enjoyed your work! Please make more daa daa daa fic :)
supriya.prabhu2 chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
nice sweet story:)
midnightblue08 chapter 3 . 1/5/2014
i love seiya you gotta admit that he can be more suitable with miyu personality wise but our girl really likes kanata so i hope seiya wont be yoo broken heartened after this fic hehehhehe :) i love it when kanata gets jealous and miyu is all clueless heehhehehe :) i love you ryu :)
Yaashee3793 chapter 3 . 12/27/2013
oh...u update,, tht was sweet...,, hope they'll understnd their love for each other :) update soon
Homunculus in the Flask chapter 3 . 12/25/2013
Good heavens! :D This fic updated again, yes! (pumps fist in the air) I always wondered what it would be like if Seiya were actually serious about his moves on Miyu and how Kanata would react to them.. Now that's some action!
Miyu namikaze chapter 3 . 12/25/2013
Wow! Thank you for this wonderful christmas gift :) i really love it, this is so sweet...Its really cute that kanata is jealous, its just shows that he really is falling in lOve with Miyu. I also like Seiya's character, he can really annoy Kanata with just a mere gesture of holding Miyu hahaha! More updates please! I looking forward for your next update as a new year present to us, your readers :)
Guest101 chapter 3 . 12/25/2013
Hoooray! You finally updated!
It's been a while.
It's so good seeing Kanata !
Hope you continue.
Please update sooooon!
Littlepuppylost chapter 3 . 12/25/2013
Omgeeee! You have updated and on Christmas Day! Thank you so much!

Hehehe! Kanata is so cute! Getting jealous! And Seiya falling in love to miyu?
Oh no! Kanata must work hard to get the attention of miyu!

Please do update!
;)
Such an awesome and cute story!
littlepuppylost chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
hey?
it's almost a year, and I want to see an update! hehehe
This is such a cute story, I hope that you will able to finish it.
:)
XxThe-Crest-Of-AnubisxX chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
Owh so sweet
More chapter please...
ForeverFlower chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
awww that's so cute! XD
littlepuppylost chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
hey there! where;s the chapter 3?
i have been dying to find out what happens next
you have an awesome story. I hope you didn't give up on it :)
black neko hime chapter 2 . 3/2/2013
and then Seiya's prediction comes true.
hehe. cute:)
littlepuppylost chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
hey there?
why aren't you updating this awesome story?
please update update!
i have been waiting for like 191483943892789123 years...
))
i super love your story!
NALU-ROCKS323 chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
kanata is soooooooooooooo cute when hes jealous!
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