Reviews for A Family Broken
wild-springflower chapter 12 . 6/1/2016
This was a very good story, exciting and suspenseful! Poor Kili, having a burn like that, but luckily his brother is wonderful and his uncle is a BAMF, so he'll be fine! Nice job!
Arrowhead1996 chapter 12 . 12/14/2013
I loved the family stuff in this story! I'm off to read the next one!
Guest chapter 12 . 11/29/2013
What's the next one called? I need more!
Lee Tum Sung chapter 11 . 10/18/2013
why you end chpter like this? im confused.
(Sorry bad english, i am Chinese)
prittykitty chapter 9 . 10/18/2013
Nice i was moving with evry word
prittykitty chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
Good very good
Lakota1172 chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
That was the most sweetest, saddest story in the world! I loved it :)
Arlothia chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
But Dis can't die! I know she can't die (unless you plan on being even more evil than you already are) but I'm still scared for her! AAAAHHHHH!
This was awesome! Those poor little dwarrows :'(
Can't wait for Thorin to make an entrance!

Keep it up!
Arlothia
Mzzmarie chapter 12 . 7/8/2013
Soooooooooooo freakin wonderful
Nalbal chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
Wow, great ending! Congratulations on completing your first fanfiction story, yay! :) Lovely job!
Guest chapter 12 . 3/3/2013
Such a beautifully written story! It was amazing!
Guest chapter 12 . 3/3/2013
I aboslutely loved this story! It's was definately one of the best that I have read.
Courtney chapter 12 . 3/3/2013
I want a sequel! Perhaps when the boys are teenage? Great story!
Bookdancer chapter 12 . 3/3/2013
Great job! I loved reading this, and keep on writing!
LiL PriNCeSs Me chapter 12 . 3/3/2013
What a great ending! I can't believe he branded poor Kili! I really loved this story. It was soooo good. I like how you set up for a sequel. I hope that happens and I can't wait!
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