Interesting story so far... Please write more

I really liked the story line and the use of the characters. Also the way the story is written is very well done and it was enjoyable to read :) I feel for Jasper so much, having to deal with it all and the sense of abandonment really pulled on my heart strings. Hopefully you'll write more :) Only one piece of criticism is sometimes spelling so you do write more I don't mind proof-reading it for you to avoid these :)

You're correct, anticonvulsants didn't come about till about 100 years later, but who cares. Interesting story. I think it's clever how you tied Edward into the story. You should continue.

I really like this plot..
Plz more;)