Reviews for Break Down (A NaruHina story)
yourAverageWritr chapter 2 . 5/28
A little unrealistic, the characters won't react that way. You skewed their personality too much to the point where the reader will cringe. Sorry, but you should really change your perspective of the characters, I mean, shine will not break down in a heavy sobbing facade. It just WONT happen.
RamenDreams18 chapter 32 . 4/1
would love to see a pic of kiba and akamaru in the akastsuki with the robes and stuff
Guest chapter 36 . 3/22
cant wait for the sequel!
Lover Of Naruto-Hinata chapter 17 . 3/20
Gaara in the story what do u think aah, i was about to admire one of my most fav fanfic writer again but this twist in story is not good enough
Guest chapter 36 . 12/8/2014
This is awesome can't wait for the sequel
sephchipmunk chapter 36 . 10/13/2014
forgot to add completed
uzoanyae chapter 36 . 8/12/2014
Nice cool fanfiction man
Teddy Vanderaa chapter 36 . 8/9/2014
This was great if there is another part to this story let me know.
I give this story 10/10. For three reasons:
1. you made very inserting
2. their are good reason for each event
3. their was main good twist and turns
zafnak chapter 24 . 7/25/2014
Hahahaha Happy ending!
zafnak chapter 23 . 7/25/2014
Tsunade and Shizune in a drunken make out session? Wooo that is sorta kinda almost like incest if you squint a bit LOL
zafnak chapter 21 . 7/25/2014
Wait wait wait. Naruto and Hinata. Check. Gaara and Sakura...okay. I can sorta get that one. But Lee and Tenten? Bushy Brows and Tenten? Really? Man that is a crack pairing and a half!
zafnak chapter 19 . 7/25/2014
Once you go Suna... you wish you went sooner? Ugh that is TERRIBLE! LOL
zafnak chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
Oh Kiba, you are such a dirty dog! LOL
zafnak chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
You know, jamming wasabi into his eyes to out cry Kakashi is SO Guy!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/27/2013
a good chapter but the only part i hate about it is you made hinata blame god for wat naruto was about to do
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