| Reviews for Break Down (A NaruHina story) |
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  izzi chapter 36 . 3/28/2013 live the story so awsome! |
 xxxevil cookiexxx chapter 36 . 3/28/2013 No Hinata! TTTT... This story was so amazing I can't wait for the next 2 stories I'm really looking forward to reading them... Again great job with the story :) |
| ZyiareHellsing chapter 36 . 3/25/2013 I think this has to be one of the best fanfics ever! Your story has a plotline unlike any other and the story is very refreshing and original. Great job! |
| UNTITLEDNFGOEIWHDSJVBSl chapter 36 . 3/25/2013 O...M...G... THIOS STORY IS ABSOLUTLY AMAZING. |
| Will S. LaVi chapter 6 . 3/24/2013 Nice NaruHina story you got |
| MoonIllusion chapter 1 . 3/24/2013 HELLO there i know you have more chapters than this one but just wanted to say that uh You shouldn't make everything so paragraph like it's really hard to read. Also when a character is saying something it is on a seperate line. eg. Naruto reached the training grounds and sank to his knees. 'P-P-Pervy-sage " he cried fresh streams of tears rode down his cheeks... Yeah like that. hope not all your chapters are not like this .. and if they aren't then great. I like this story a lot. |
| ZyiareHellsing chapter 34 . 3/24/2013 Can't wait to read how this ends! |
| tex chapter 2 . 3/15/2013 this is prehapps the most rediclous chapter ever |
| xxxevil cookiexxx chapter 33 . 3/16/2013 Woah that chapter was intense... Can't wait for the next chapter :) |
| Guest chapter 32 . 3/13/2013 OMG ! You have got to be one of the best authors EVER! I love your creativity although it's depressing , I feel your pain. Break down has an awesome storyline , unlike other fanfics you made me feel like I was in an other dimension. I forgot all about my pain and I concentrated on someone else for a change. So if I could rate you out of 10 . It's a satisfying ten ! :D - AnimeGirlLovesShinee :) |
| jus4theheckofit98 chapter 33 . 3/15/2013 What?! Is this the end?! ARE THEY DEAD? |
| sasmith chapter 33 . 3/15/2013 Close to the end you have Sakura helping Tsunade heal Naruto. I thought Sakara was dead. |
| ZyiareHellsing chapter 33 . 3/15/2013 So many character deaths...T-T |
| jus4theheckofit98 chapter 32 . 3/10/2013 wtf?! Naruto's dead! Oh, the ending better be good. -.- |
| Legionary Prime chapter 32 . 3/10/2013 Can Naruto, if he comes back from the dead and quote Robot Chicken's version of Boba Fett "Back from the dead, asshole" to Kiba? |