|Reviews for Lineage|
| ww1990ww chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
I will be honest if you didn't screw this might be very good story. But consider how much crosses you will adding the posibilty of hapening this inrease as well.
| Jvisser chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS A GOOD STORY!
| 917brat chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
this sounds different but really amazing please keep this up.
| legalbugger chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
cant wait for the next part than!
| RyuNoRainbow chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Sooooooooooo this is slash with Percy/Harry? Eh. Not really a fan of those, but I think this story is still good.
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
you might want to review your word choices and use smaller, but more accurate words. some of the ones you used do not fit well with the phrases.
Failed to do so shall be injurious to your health
would more accurately be: failure to do so could be damaging to your health.
other misused words: adulate, butterbear, fatuous, etc.
Yes, that was what Harry yearned for, as the fresh water scent was just not enough to pacify his tempestuous mind, and soothe his raucous nerves threatening to drive him fatuous. t
| mattcun chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
plz write more